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I had been sharing my Comics Ideas with ~KandosMarios those Months, and I realized that I REALLY want to draw my New OCs into Comics (I can't hold them in my mind anymore, some of them had been created 1 Year Ago! ) I promised to myself NOT to reveal them until the storyline reach their Comic part... but There is an Incredible LONG way until then!

So I was like "Screw it, I am going to draw all of them, in a Picture, to have people know what is happening in my mind!"
So here they are, my 5 New OC Team Members
Oclaf, Melissa, Xenia, Ralph & Ariane!
and Of course I will give a Little Description for Each one in the Comment section (They will have Reference Sheets for each, but right now this is a Mini Reference Sheet for ALL of them)

(From Left to Right, there is a lot of HTML coding here ._.
Hover your mouse on the Words which are underlined like this!)
Name: Oclaf
Age: Unknown (Consider him as a Teenager)
Race: Chimeric Raven Avian .
Occupation: Tamed Creature.
Class: Elemental Mage.
Weapon: Sorcerer's Ring.
Sub Weapon: Beak and Claws (Νot recommended)

Description: Black feathers which cover his Torso and Hips till the Knees. Yellow eyes. Orange Beak, Arms and Legs. White Claws. 4 Fingers (He has Thumbs) Anisodactyl feet. He has two medium-Size Bat/Demon wings on his back.
He wears a Black with White edges Tunic (Which looks like a Skirt) Metal Braces on his arms, A Shoulder pad on his right shoulder and a Brown belt with a Skull on it.
He wears the Sorcerer's Ring on his right foot. (It looks like golden Bracelet with a Purple Octagon Gem on it)

All his magic power come from the ring, without the ring he is Weak and useless, it gives him the Ability to use Elemental Spells. The fact that he is able to fly, gives him a great advantage.
He can be rude and Short-Tempered, especially when someone insults his height and anatomy.
Carefree and easygoing, he avoids hard work.
He loves food!

Short Story: After he was Kicked out of the nest by his father. Oclaf was roaming on the Human world, in where he found Shelter in an Uninhabited Tower where a Old mage used to live. There he discovered a precious ancient artifact which granted him great power as well as great trouble.

Name: Melissa
Age: 18
Race: Dwarf (Her Appearance was inspired by the Lineage 2 Female Dwarfs)
Occupation: Miner/Wannabe Pilot
Class:
Weapon: Pickaxe/Shovel
Sub Weapon: Bombs (Gunpowder)

Description: Light Brown hair (Long Ponytail) Orange color eyes, she wears Goggles on her head, Green Khaki shirt, a small chest armor plate, green Khaki short skirt with trousers, Khaki neck handkerchief, brown boots that contain metal parts, brown gauntlets, belt with suspenders.

She fight with Pickaxes (or Shovels) and she is really good in Close combat. She can deactivate traps and Steal find Gold during battle.
She can create Bomb which she Spam during battle, surprising the enemy.
She is Energetic, Childish, Curious and Greedy, she always snoop into other people's business claiming that she just wants to help. She can make situations REALLY uncomfortably with her Commentary
She get depressed when people call her Flat-chested.

Short Story: Melissa is living in the mines with her Grandfather. She spends all her day digging and crafting. There was discovered that a big amount of the mines contains Mana Crystals.
One day soldiers from the Human kingdom came with Imperial Order and took all the Crystals Resources in the name of the King.
Months after the Soldiers' Visit, strange magical Creatures started to appear in the mines. Since Melissa's Grandfather was too old to visit the Human capital, he sent Melissa with her new Companions to speak with Imperial Spellcasters and scientists about the appearance of those Creatures.
Name: Xenia
Age: 23
Race: Dark Elf
Occupation: Piano Teacher / Messenger of Peace.
Class: Priest.
Weapon: Maestro Baton.
Sub Weapon: Books (That contain Music Scores)

Description: She has short straight light-blue hair (a la Cleopatra), purple eyes, gray skin. She wears a brown leather armor, white purple collar, a Long purple skirt (sewn with black thread) which hides all the lower body. (*You can't see it in this Picture, but she wears black heels boots)

She is 100% Support Class. She can use Full party Healing, Buffering and Reviving Spells as well as few Anti-Buffs spells which target and lower enemies' stats.
Unfortunately she only has 2-3 Attacking spells to protect herself.
The majority of her spells are named after Music-Related names.
Gentle, Caring, Romantic and warm personality. She always taking care of her friends and makes sure that everyone is alright.
She plays and study piano, she also writes her own songs.
She admires the beauty of the Nature under the Moonlight with the Jasmines' perfume.

Short Story: Raised in an Orphanage, Xenia never met her parents.
When she was young, she decided to take part in the great war (along with a good friend), as a Messenger of Piece representing her race. (Dark Elves)
During her travel, she met and fell in love with a young Elf warrior, but unfortunately due to some unfortunate events, the romance didn't last for too long.
One of the Elfen War Generals was Murdered and Xenia's Partner was accused for the Crime.
After her Mission Failed, she returned to the Orphanage and stayed there Until now...
Name: Ralph
Age: 14
Race: Half-Elf
Occupation: School kid.
Class: Card Manipulator.
Weapon: Magic Cards
Sub Weapon: Bags

Description: Fluffy Gray/Silver hair, (he has a very small ponytail) Black eyes, Notice how short his ears are.
Wears a Light green coat, Blue shirt, short pants and shoes (with white socks). He always caries a weird shoulder bag, a little magic puppet follows him the most of the time (The puppet is a Card Monster)

Ralph can use 3 Different types of card
Blue Cards: Blue cards allow Ralph to summon Monsters (1 Monster per time)
Red Cards: Allows Ralph and his Monster(s) to use Magic Spells.
Ralph can combine Red Cards with his Puppet to change his Puppet appearance and attack skills.
Green Cards: Green Card allow Ralph to use Healing and Supporting spells on him and his Summoned monsters. (Some rare cards heal Party members as well)
He is able to use Low-Level card right now, due to his age and LVL.
Innocent, Childish, Smart and Honest but unfortunately Shy and Sensitive (when he is scared, he cries, A lot )

Short Story: His (Elf) father broke up with his (Human) Mother when Ralph was still a baby. Now Mother and son lives together in a small village along with other races (The majority of the residents are humans, there are a few elves, orcs and dwarfs as well.)
Ralph couldn't make friends because the other children were keep avoiding him. He was spendings his time alone.
One day while he was walking on the forest, he was attacked by a Wild Boar, Fortunately for him he was saved by an Orc Lumberjack who carried the Scared Ralph safely home.
After this event, Ralph started spending time with that Orc, they had a lot of things in Common and they actually became Friends (A friendship close to sibling...)
2 Years later the Orc went on an Adventure , Ralph wanted come along but it wasn't possible. Now he waits his friend to return...
Name: Ariane
Age: 27
Race: Human
Occupation: ???
Class: Fencer
Weapon: Light Swords
Sub Weapon: Guns

Description: Short red hair, red eyes. she wear a black-red corset and mini skirt, black boots, necklace and bracelets. She is wearing Pearl Earrings.

Ariane is a great fencer, she attacks fast and she is able cause piercing, bleeding and Poison (?) damage to the enemy she face. Her gun use gunpowder, but she needs to reload every 5 shots.
Provocative, suggestive, Two-Faced she can use her charm to seduce her enemies into a Death Trap She is not a bad person though... she only kills criminals and Up-class scums who take advantage of poor people.
She loves spending "Quality" time with men though.

Short Story: [Story not Available, Contains Future Comic Spoilers.]

Random Trivia
Both Melissa and Xenia are Greek Names
Originally Xenia was going to be the Elemental Mage.
Melissa's Originally weapon was going to be Gloves with animal's nails. (Too much JPRGish)
Oclaf, Melissa and Xenia were created during my Summer Holidays (2010)
Ralph and Ariane are my latest characters.
Ariane's Sub Weapon was originally going to be a Metal Gauntlet which shots magic missiles. (Too JRPGish)
Oclaf's Original clothes were brown.
The characters will appear in comics, with the row they appear here (1st Oclaf, 2nd Melissa e.t.c)
Oclaf and Melissa are my favorites.
Oclaf is the Shortest characters so far.
Ralph is the Youngest character so far.
Ariane is the Oldest character so far.
This Description was a Bitch to write!

Made with GIMP
Characters, Art © ~Leonidash15

...Now I would appreciate if you leave Feedbacks relatives to this Deviation...

Description
Please Feed me with Feedbacks, I REALLY need them!
I had been sharing my Comics Ideas with ~KandosMarios those Months, and I realized that I REALLY want to draw my New OCs into Comics (I can't hold them in my mind anymore, some of them had been created 1 Year Ago! ) I promised to myself NOT to reveal them until the storyline reach their Comic part... but There is an Incredible LONG way until then!

So I was like "Screw it, I am going to draw all of them, in a Picture, to have people know what is happening in my mind!"
So here they are, my 5 New OC Team Members
Oclaf, Melissa, Xenia, Ralph & Ariane!
and Of course I will give a Little Description for Each one in the Comment section (They will have Reference Sheets for each, but right now this is a Mini Reference Sheet for ALL of them)

(From Left to Right, there is a lot of HTML coding here ._.
Hover your mouse on the Words which are underlined like this!)
Name: Oclaf
Age: Unknown (Consider him as a Teenager)
Race: Chimeric Raven Avian .
Occupation: Tamed Creature.
Class: Elemental Mage.
Weapon: Sorcerer's Ring.
Sub Weapon: Beak and Claws (Νot recommended)

Description: Black feathers which cover his Torso and Hips till the Knees. Yellow eyes. Orange Beak, Arms and Legs. White Claws. 4 Fingers (He has Thumbs) Anisodactyl feet. He has two medium-Size Bat/Demon wings on his back.
He wears a Black with White edges Tunic (Which looks like a Skirt) Metal Braces on his arms, A Shoulder pad on his right shoulder and a Brown belt with a Skull on it.
He wears the Sorcerer's Ring on his right foot. (It looks like golden Bracelet with a Purple Octagon Gem on it)

All his magic power come from the ring, without the ring he is Weak and useless, it gives him the Ability to use Elemental Spells. The fact that he is able to fly, gives him a great advantage.
He can be rude and Short-Tempered, especially when someone insults his height and anatomy.
Carefree and easygoing, he avoids hard work.
He loves food!

Short Story: After he was Kicked out of the nest by his father. Oclaf was roaming on the Human world, in where he found Shelter in an Uninhabited Tower where a Old mage used to live. There he discovered a precious ancient artifact which granted him great power as well as great trouble.

Name: Melissa
Age: 18
Race: Dwarf (Her Appearance was inspired by the Lineage 2 Female Dwarfs)
Occupation: Miner/Wannabe Pilot
Class:
Weapon: Pickaxe/Shovel
Sub Weapon: Bombs (Gunpowder)

Description: Light Brown hair (Long Ponytail) Orange color eyes, she wears Goggles on her head, Green Khaki shirt, a small chest armor plate, green Khaki short skirt with trousers, Khaki neck handkerchief, brown boots that contain metal parts, brown gauntlets, belt with suspenders.

She fight with Pickaxes (or Shovels) and she is really good in Close combat. She can deactivate traps and Steal find Gold during battle.
She can create Bomb which she Spam during battle, surprising the enemy.
She is Energetic, Childish, Curious and Greedy, she always snoop into other people's business claiming that she just wants to help. She can make situations REALLY uncomfortably with her Commentary
She get depressed when people call her Flat-chested.

Short Story: Melissa is living in the mines with her Grandfather. She spends all her day digging and crafting. There was discovered that a big amount of the mines contains Mana Crystals.
One day soldiers from the Human kingdom came with Imperial Order and took all the Crystals Resources in the name of the King.
Months after the Soldiers' Visit, strange magical Creatures started to appear in the mines. Since Melissa's Grandfather was too old to visit the Human capital, he sent Melissa with her new Companions to speak with Imperial Spellcasters and scientists about the appearance of those Creatures.
Name: Xenia
Age: 23
Race: Dark Elf
Occupation: Piano Teacher / Messenger of Peace.
Class: Priest.
Weapon: Maestro Baton.
Sub Weapon: Books (That contain Music Scores)

Description: She has short straight light-blue hair (a la Cleopatra), purple eyes, gray skin. She wears a brown leather armor, white purple collar, a Long purple skirt (sewn with black thread) which hides all the lower body. (*You can't see it in this Picture, but she wears black heels boots)

She is 100% Support Class. She can use Full party Healing, Buffering and Reviving Spells as well as few Anti-Buffs spells which target and lower enemies' stats.
Unfortunately she only has 2-3 Attacking spells to protect herself.
The majority of her spells are named after Music-Related names.
Gentle, Caring, Romantic and warm personality. She always taking care of her friends and makes sure that everyone is alright.
She plays and study piano, she also writes her own songs.
She admires the beauty of the Nature under the Moonlight with the Jasmines' perfume.

Short Story: Raised in an Orphanage, Xenia never met her parents.
When she was young, she decided to take part in the great war (along with a good friend), as a Messenger of Piece representing her race. (Dark Elves)
During her travel, she met and fell in love with a young Elf warrior, but unfortunately due to some unfortunate events, the romance didn't last for too long.
One of the Elfen War Generals was Murdered and Xenia's Partner was accused for the Crime.
After her Mission Failed, she returned to the Orphanage and stayed there Until now...
Name: Ralph
Age: 14
Race: Half-Elf
Occupation: School kid.
Class: Card Manipulator.
Weapon: Magic Cards
Sub Weapon: Bags

Description: Fluffy Gray/Silver hair, (he has a very small ponytail) Black eyes, Notice how short his ears are.
Wears a Light green coat, Blue shirt, short pants and shoes (with white socks). He always caries a weird shoulder bag, a little magic puppet follows him the most of the time (The puppet is a Card Monster)

Ralph can use 3 Different types of card
Blue Cards: Blue cards allow Ralph to summon Monsters (1 Monster per time)
Red Cards: Allows Ralph and his Monster(s) to use Magic Spells.
Ralph can combine Red Cards with his Puppet to change his Puppet appearance and attack skills.
Green Cards: Green Card allow Ralph to use Healing and Supporting spells on him and his Summoned monsters. (Some rare cards heal Party members as well)
He is able to use Low-Level card right now, due to his age and LVL.
Innocent, Childish, Smart and Honest but unfortunately Shy and Sensitive (when he is scared, he cries, A lot )

Short Story: His (Elf) father broke up with his (Human) Mother when Ralph was still a baby. Now Mother and son lives together in a small village along with other races (The majority of the residents are humans, there are a few elves, orcs and dwarfs as well.)
Ralph couldn't make friends because the other children were keep avoiding him. He was spendings his time alone.
One day while he was walking on the forest, he was attacked by a Wild Boar, Fortunately for him he was saved by an Orc Lumberjack who carried the Scared Ralph safely home.
After this event, Ralph started spending time with that Orc, they had a lot of things in Common and they actually became Friends (A friendship close to sibling...)
2 Years later the Orc went on an Adventure , Ralph wanted come along but it wasn't possible. Now he waits his friend to return...
Name: Ariane
Age: 27
Race: Human
Occupation: ???
Class: Fencer
Weapon: Light Swords
Sub Weapon: Guns

Description: Short red hair, red eyes. she wear a black-red corset and mini skirt, black boots, necklace and bracelets. She is wearing Pearl Earrings.

Ariane is a great fencer, she attacks fast and she is able cause piercing, bleeding and Poison (?) damage to the enemy she face. Her gun use gunpowder, but she needs to reload every 5 shots.
Provocative, suggestive, Two-Faced she can use her charm to seduce her enemies into a Death Trap She is not a bad person though... she only kills criminals and Up-class scums who take advantage of poor people.
She loves spending "Quality" time with men though.

Short Story: [Story not Available, Contains Future Comic Spoilers.]

Random Trivia
Both Melissa and Xenia are Greek Names
Originally Xenia was going to be the Elemental Mage.
Melissa's Originally weapon was going to be Gloves with animal's nails. (Too much JPRGish)
Oclaf, Melissa and Xenia were created during my Summer Holidays (2010)
Ralph and Ariane are my latest characters.
Ariane's Sub Weapon was originally going to be a Metal Gauntlet which shots magic missiles. (Too JRPGish)
Oclaf's Original clothes were brown.
The characters will appear in comics, with the row they appear here (1st Oclaf, 2nd Melissa e.t.c)
Oclaf and Melissa are my favorites.
Oclaf is the Shortest characters so far.
Ralph is the Youngest character so far.
Ariane is the Oldest character so far.
This Description was a Bitch to write!

Made with GIMP
Characters, Art © ~Leonidash15

...Now I would appreciate if you leave Feedbacks relatives to this Deviation...