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xXDillonXx [2006-12-20 00:02:36 +0000 UTC]
Overall I like the layout of the picture. The clouds, although not done, are very good looking. (I'm terrible at clouds) Now onto the woman herself. Her chin is very bulky, almost like a man's chin, I think it should be more round and not as "chisseled". Next up the breasts are too straight forward. If one is facing forward the other should be at a 3/4 perspective. Also on her left leg (one closest to the veiwer) the inner thigh is too skinny. It should be a little bulkier, but not too much. The arms could be more "fluid" because as they are now it looks like they are rigidy. This is no way intended to put you down, because I do like the picture, but there are small details that add up to problems with the picture. I wrote more than I intended but hopefully I helped in someway. Keep on Drawing!
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leonvw In reply to xXDillonXx [2006-12-20 01:40:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh, Thank you very very much for your comment! I'll keep all this in mind in my next drawing, and try to do better! Thank you, also, for commenting at all!! I'll check your page now!
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Glinadaro [2006-12-19 03:14:42 +0000 UTC]
lol You mean you want me to critique it--in detail?
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leonvw In reply to Glinadaro [2006-12-19 05:01:43 +0000 UTC]
Would be nice, yes.
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