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Published: 2011-04-11 07:10:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 819; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 9
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Description A man shares a train compartment with old strangers who ask about things that pass the window. Drawn in December.
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Comments: 13

Zombiehellmonkey [2011-04-12 17:38:12 +0000 UTC]

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I like these drawings of yours where you feel as if you're actually there. This time, it feels I'm a passenger on some kind of alien transport.

Love the details, you can read the newspaper over the shoulder of the guy in the foreground. There is drama in the scene, as if you're taking part or eavesdropping on a conversation.

The only thing that could make this better, is if you added a view from the window - something surprising and unexpected but not distracting. Also the lighting in the carriage could create more of a mood to draw the viewer in even more, especially if the light was particularly selective about what it revealed, and related to what was happening outside the carriage.

I give this drawing A+++ because it reminds me of the ink lineart illustrations in fantasy books that I used to read in my youth. Nostalgic and whimsical.

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leothefox In reply to Zombiehellmonkey [2011-04-12 18:36:14 +0000 UTC]

Whimsy is a big reason for my use of the train theme. In part its inspired by my love of 30s movies and of Mex Ernst collages. Thanks very much for the crit

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BeebDweeb [2011-04-13 10:53:21 +0000 UTC]

I like how you captures the ordinary moments of your extraordinary world.

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leothefox In reply to BeebDweeb [2011-04-13 16:56:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! The extraordinary can be pretty ordinary sometimes

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Team-RazorBlade [2011-04-12 06:23:34 +0000 UTC]

It Lookz Scary....

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leothefox In reply to Team-RazorBlade [2011-04-12 07:16:51 +0000 UTC]

Oooo I could make it scarier

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Team-RazorBlade In reply to leothefox [2011-04-12 07:30:53 +0000 UTC]

O PLZ~ Dont.... XC

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leothefox In reply to Team-RazorBlade [2011-04-12 07:42:25 +0000 UTC]

But this really isn't that scary, the people are just oldish.

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Team-RazorBlade In reply to leothefox [2011-06-08 12:16:40 +0000 UTC]

Ya,It Make It Look Scary...=<

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leothefox In reply to Team-RazorBlade [2011-06-08 16:39:46 +0000 UTC]

Hehe in that case you'd better keep clear of retirement communities and the states of Florida and Arizona

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Team-RazorBlade In reply to leothefox [2011-06-10 14:43:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanx 4 Tellin' Me...O.o

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leothefox In reply to Team-RazorBlade [2011-06-10 17:32:14 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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Team-RazorBlade In reply to leothefox [2011-07-05 08:21:02 +0000 UTC]

XD

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