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Published: 2012-05-20 11:52:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 1943; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 41
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This is my OC Denisha. I made a character sheet about her a few days ago:
This is my 'finals' piece. Everytime I thought 'screw school' I drew a little bit more. But now I really really have to learn physics
Hope you like it! ♥
PS, the reference for the sofa is from
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I think the stomach looks a bit flat. However, this is a lovely character design
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I see what you mean, there is something wrong with the anatomy of her middle section....
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Beautiful. I thought this was a photograph when I saw the thumbnail lol.
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Hello there. Let's see what I can do for you:
Negative:
-There seem to be some mistakes in her face. The nose seems to be a bit big, and the distance between mouth and nose is a bit too small.
-Her for us right hand seems to be a but big (bigger than her face. A hand normally is just a little bit smaller than the face)
-I have the idea that the her "upper body" (her boobs, shoulders, head ect.) is in a different position than the lower parts (from her belly till her feet). Normally her belly should be the part where the body is turned, so I have the idea the belly button is at the wrong place. Maybe you could use a ref to fix this.
-There is a white line at the for us right side of her body, which I think shouldn't be there.
-Her body doesn't seem to rest on the pillow which lays in the hole of her back.
Positive:
-Everything is very detailed with patterns, curls, ect. which looks very nice!
-I really like the lightning
-The peacock is drawn beautiful! It looks very realistic.
-I really like how you shaded and colored her hair
-The folds in her clothes look very realistic and are very well drawn!
I hope this critique will be useful to you. You did an amazing job already! All the things I could find are just little details which you only see when you really search for it.
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Thanks for the critique,
I tried to use no reference for the body for the first time,
so I failed with that haha
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You're very welcome
Ah yeah, working without ref is hard indeed. I once read a tutorial about how to use them: you only have to use them to understand the anatomy and then draw the pose as it's in your head by using the knowledge you just got. Still......it's hard x) I can't do it either
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Thanks for the tip,
And I'll try
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This is so perfect, the lightning and colors are amazing!
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haha, zo zei ik het vast niet
Het is meer dat ik niet zo creatief ben als ik zou willen
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Sort of but yeah :'D
Nou als dit niet creatief is, ja dan weet ik het ook niet hoor.
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Your paintings are really distinct! I guess that's a good thing!
This one is really nice!
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Thankyou! And I'm a person who likes to shift between styles and interest a lot
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Haha, Maar dan wil je toch niet wakker worden? XP
en dankje!
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I really love the pic And i have the same problem I'm in the mittle of my finals and creativity hits me with all it's might
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Thanks!
yeah, it's so frustrating. Because I now for sure, that I'll have an artblock in the summer
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I feel the same!
I know right after I've finished the finals
I won't be able to draw anything
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But maybe we will get some inspiration from the wonderful holiday locations we will be visiting this summer ^^
At least I hope the Spanish blue sea will give me some
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well i hope for you that it will
for me i hope visiting some of my friends will have the same effect
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Omg
This is sooo awesome
and beautifull
I really like her design *__*
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Thank you!!
Normally belly dancers have dark hair, so I wanted to change that
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idd, I think it's an very cool idea of you
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