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Published: 2015-12-23 01:19:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 973; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Description 1. I'm not particularly attractive 
My bone structure is quite questionable. 

2. I'm a little bit boring. 
I don't go outside much. 

3. I'm a little too aggressive 

Sometimes I yell excitedly without really caring. 

4. I'm too emotional 
I cry a lot and I have a ton of mood swings.

5. I am an artist
And that's probably the one thing I'm good at.

6. I like rain 
Even during school 

7. I don't read very much 
Which is the reason why my vocabulary isn't that big 

8. I doodle a lot 
So say goodbye to whatever homework you have. 

9. I'm way too optimistic 

10. I won't dream of you, 
Because you guys are my dreams

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Comments: 45

TheSproutingArtist [2016-05-15 11:29:28 +0000 UTC]

My reply to each point:
1. Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. You may not think you're attractive but that doesn't mean no one else does. Also, true beauty comes from the heart and all your watchers know you are beautiful.
2. Not going outside much and being boring aren't the same thing. Besides, if you're with a friend even lounging around reading books becomes something fun.
3. You do need to work on this one. Be patient with yourself and others. Give time. A friend will tolerate the occasional outburst but don't make it routine.
4. We all understand and relate completely to mood swings. Steer clear of fair-weather friends. A good friend will hug you close when you're crying and be your shoulder to lean on.
5. This is a GOOD point! Why is this even on the list?
6. This is a good thing too. I love the rain. Especially the smell and the sound.
7. Soooooo, I can only be friends with someone with a good vocabulary? By now it seems like you're just trying to get 10 points across even when 10 points don't exist.
8. Well, do your homework, yeah, but doodling is epic. Do show me your doodles sometime. This shouldn't be on this list
9. This shouldn't be on the list either.
10. This point doesn't even make sense and again, shouldn't be on the list at all.

So basically out of these 10 points I guess 4 are kinda meh kinda issues and the other 6 actually aren't even issues at all. Love yourself because we love you. Believe in yourself. Be strong. And look for best friends before you look for a boy/girlfriend. Best friends are far more important than a relationship.

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lightbleueyes In reply to TheSproutingArtist [2016-05-15 16:23:32 +0000 UTC]

Aww Thank you so much! I really appreciate your words! They are very kind and encouraging! I put some things that don't make sense because a lot of the people around me don't like those things! D:

Thank you so much!

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TheSproutingArtist In reply to lightbleueyes [2016-05-16 05:18:20 +0000 UTC]

Don't listen to those people. Focus on those that love you and focus on loving yourself

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lightbleueyes In reply to TheSproutingArtist [2016-05-16 16:06:38 +0000 UTC]

<3<3

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grand-ole-osprey [2016-01-20 04:46:32 +0000 UTC]

I don't understand #10.

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lightbleueyes In reply to grand-ole-osprey [2016-01-20 15:09:03 +0000 UTC]

Okay well, Its trying to explain that I'm not going to dream of true love or whatever because I've already found it through the dA community!

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grand-ole-osprey In reply to lightbleueyes [2016-01-20 16:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh I get it. That's nice that you have a niche here.

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lightbleueyes In reply to grand-ole-osprey [2016-01-20 17:11:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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EniRGomega [2016-01-19 03:26:28 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like me as well, haha.
That's how I feel about myself ;v;

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lightbleueyes In reply to EniRGomega [2016-01-19 03:40:29 +0000 UTC]

 

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EniRGomega In reply to lightbleueyes [2016-01-19 03:47:11 +0000 UTC]

 

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SSJCyberSonic [2016-01-04 08:34:49 +0000 UTC]

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lightbleueyes In reply to SSJCyberSonic [2016-01-04 14:45:36 +0000 UTC]

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all-win [2015-12-23 23:27:58 +0000 UTC]

I see 10 reasons to kiss you

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lightbleueyes In reply to all-win [2015-12-23 23:50:19 +0000 UTC]

Awwww! Thank you so much! That's very sweet of you to say!

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Iyotaro [2015-12-23 16:01:56 +0000 UTC]

ughh LBE ;___; i feel you i too is rejected by someone i like-like 
but don't worry !! you'll find someone soon bruh afterall, you're still young
and i'll totes kiss you tbh oK IF YOU'RE COMFY BC IM A GIRL AND YOU'RE A GIRL 
have a virtual, semi-uncomfortable kiss u3u <33333 

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lightbleueyes In reply to Iyotaro [2015-12-23 20:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Awww noo! ;-; I'm so sorry you did! It's one of the worst feelings in the world!

And you'll find someone too! :0 We are both still young, so let's see what the future holds! :3

And I'll totes kiss you too Iyo! ^^ In truth gender doesn't bother me one bit cause I fall in love with people not genders! :3

Have one from me too! ·3·

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Iyotaro In reply to lightbleueyes [2015-12-24 11:29:53 +0000 UTC]

yeahhh ;___;
mhmmm !! i'm sure we will !!

u3333333333u 
i think personality in a person is what truly matters!!

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lightbleueyes In reply to Iyotaro [2015-12-24 13:35:26 +0000 UTC]



Indeed! Personality and kindness! :3

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redhawk1986 [2015-12-23 03:45:15 +0000 UTC]

This is really deep stuff here

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lightbleueyes In reply to redhawk1986 [2015-12-23 04:55:30 +0000 UTC]

Hehe Thanks! :3

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redhawk1986 In reply to lightbleueyes [2015-12-23 06:44:21 +0000 UTC]

No problem! I love your poetry.

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lightbleueyes In reply to redhawk1986 [2015-12-23 06:47:03 +0000 UTC]

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redhawk1986 In reply to lightbleueyes [2015-12-23 07:55:08 +0000 UTC]

And you have earned a watch from me.

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lightbleueyes In reply to redhawk1986 [2015-12-24 03:58:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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redhawk1986 In reply to lightbleueyes [2015-12-24 04:21:15 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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TechnoStinger [2015-12-23 02:20:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow that sounds just like me. 

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lightbleueyes In reply to TechnoStinger [2015-12-23 02:35:18 +0000 UTC]

Glad you can relate! ^_^ 

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TechnoStinger In reply to lightbleueyes [2015-12-23 02:36:17 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Kuro-fukurou [2015-12-23 02:02:08 +0000 UTC]

If someone doesn't kiss you because of any of those reasons you listed, they're probably not worth getting kissed by (or they're bad kissers coming up with excuses lol). There isn't even anything with half the stuff on that list o7o
But if I were a dashing young man, I'd kiss you Blue XD

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lightbleueyes In reply to Kuro-fukurou [2015-12-23 02:37:36 +0000 UTC]

xD Bad kissers! xD Maybe!  

Aww Thanks Kuro! 030 I'd kiss you too if you if you liked girls! xD 

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PaperArmor [2015-12-23 01:28:20 +0000 UTC]

I kinda understand this.

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lightbleueyes In reply to PaperArmor [2015-12-23 02:37:42 +0000 UTC]

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PaperArmor In reply to lightbleueyes [2015-12-23 03:28:39 +0000 UTC]

^ ^

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Foxy-Loves-Markimoo [2015-12-23 01:28:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It's true for me.

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lightbleueyes In reply to Foxy-Loves-Markimoo [2015-12-23 02:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you could relate!  

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Foxy-Loves-Markimoo In reply to lightbleueyes [2015-12-23 03:04:19 +0000 UTC]

np

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babynuke [2015-12-23 01:21:39 +0000 UTC]

What's wrong with liking rain? Or doodling!

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lightbleueyes In reply to babynuke [2015-12-23 02:38:41 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely nothing!  

But apparently people don't like the fact that I doodle on everything and that I like rain! xD 

Thank you for commenting!

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rainbow000pegasus In reply to lightbleueyes [2015-12-23 06:51:32 +0000 UTC]

You should have seen my friends when I doodled on literally everything...

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lightbleueyes In reply to rainbow000pegasus [2015-12-23 15:32:47 +0000 UTC]

I can imagine! xD

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babynuke In reply to lightbleueyes [2015-12-23 02:41:21 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! And all you list, I'm sure there's people out there who love you for all the things you list You just might not know them (yet), or they never told you! It's not like you make yourself sound like a horrible person here.

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lightbleueyes In reply to babynuke [2015-12-23 02:44:15 +0000 UTC]

Aww Thank you! Maybe I'll find those people one day or they'll find me! Well I'm glad I don't sound horrible!  

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babynuke In reply to lightbleueyes [2015-12-23 02:51:46 +0000 UTC]

Well what you think may be negative others may not see that way at all! Even when it comes to looks, most people are very negative about themselves even when there's really no reason to!

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lightbleueyes In reply to babynuke [2015-12-23 03:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, everybody has a different way of looking at things! ^^ That's what I like about life to be honest! I like diversity and the fact someone can look at themselves and see nothing but another can see a whole galaxy!

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