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OMG!...that was hell out of journey! 
But I hope you guys like it as much as I do.
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING MY UNDERTALE FANCOMIC : UNDERTAKE - YOU'RE AWESOME!!
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It's weird - I found you just today when you submitted your stars picture, and when I noticed thumbnail pics of an Undertale AU comic in your gallery, I decided to investigate.
I wound up reading all 30 pages in a single day. I know this was almost 2 years ago, but it was still a good story even though it was short.
My only real issue with it was the lack of any main characters besides Frisk, Chara, Sans, Papyrus, and Toby. Dr. Alphys was briefly mentioned, and Nabstablook was hinted at. That wing-ding font in some parts was clearly a referrence to W.D. Gaster (I like to think he's the dad of the bone bros. 
Also, the fact that Chara killed the monsters before Snowdin implies that he killed Toriel! Poor Goat-Mom! 
Overall, even though it only focused on a handful of the full cast, it was still a nice AU, and I thank you for taking the time to make it.
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THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! This review is something I wanted for the longest time! *I literally was crying from happiness while reading it*
This is my first comic that has more than 3 characters present end even this small group was a challenge to handle. Like- every moment something is happening you must think of what the other characters are doing and that can be pretty difficult. Other factor was that I didn't want to draw it for milenia so I decided in the beginning that the comic will have around 30 pages
Toriel is still alive. Frisk fully completed the Ruins and Chara only killed monsters around Snowdin so you don't have to be sad.(to be honest this story have so much plot holes that's absolutely embarrassing )
And finally I have a small request- if you could spred a word about it .ut if you don't that's Ok. For me this is one of the biggest achiements and the fact that some people like it, is just cherry on top of cake .
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I am busy with projects of my own, but I will certainly consider promoting your work so that others will give it a look. Perhaps I'll post a link to it in my next journal entry, but no promises.
Also, thanks for the llama.
On a related note, I've been colabing with another DA member - together, we've been working on not ONE, but TWO sister AUs (one for Undertale, and the other for Deltarune - that's why the AUs are "sister" AUs), and they involve a brave girl who is no stranger to dangerous mystical forces----> along with a younger pink-haired double whose name starts with "K" instead of "C"!
These are the AUs of Coratale, and Korarune. They're not yet complete, but we (myself and Minecraftfan11scr) got a good number of chapters done on both of them. Would you be interested in them? (I wrote the script while she did the art for each chapter.)
I ask this, and I don't even know if you like Coraline or even know her tale 
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I could read it if you want. I think that's great idea and Coraline is such lovable girl. Her story still stuck with me.
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That's good.
Coratale picks up right where the Coraline movie left off, so it's a sort-of fan-sequel/cross-over. Here, Coraline takes on the role of Frisk.
This is just the cover, but the links are in the description. 
Also, here is the sister AU of Korarune, where Koraline takes on the role of Kris.
I came up with the idea of Koraline and designed her normal form, but Minecraftfan11scr designed her Darkworld look, so it was a joint-effort.
These two are two halves of the same story. Koraline even makes friends with some new Fan Characters I made just for this story, but I'll allow you to discover them as you read.
And it should be noted that with each chapter there is a single image, but the actual text of each chapter is in the description below each image. I hope you are able to handle this format.
Please be nice to Minecraftfan11scr, as she did her best on the images. I look forward to rereading each part so that I can read what you think of our work.
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