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Published: 2003-11-12 15:23:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 252; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 17
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Description She stared long into the mirror.
Brushed the hair of her face.
Clenches her teeth and mutters.
Tries to believe her words.
Ignores the taunting voices.

He drives down the road.
Beer bottle clutched in his hand.
Faster and faster he goes.
Swerving over the line.
Narrowly missing a car.

She covers the bruises.
Wipes away the tears.
Closes her eyes and sighs.
Takes one last look in the mirror.
Moves away slowly, reluctantly.

He pulls into the drive.
Staggers out of his car.
Stumbles over a tricycle.
Curses,slamming his fist into the ground.
Throws open the front door.

She looks up and trembles.
The liquor on his breath strong.
A knife hidden behind her back.
It will end, she swears.
She slowly stands.

He looms menacingly over her.
Breathing in her lilac perfume.
The yelling beings,her tears fall.
Kinfe blade glints in the moonlight.
He groans once and is gone.

She hides his body.
Her mind numb,heart racing.
Washes the blood off.
Kisses her daughter's cheek.
Climbs into her bed and sleeps.

His body was never found.
Her bruises cleared,her steps livlier.
Never again would he come home late.
With liquor on his breath.
Nor would he hit her again.
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Comments: 7

tneconni [2003-11-12 20:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. I also like how two people merge, and make one story. Very well done

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lilmejuju In reply to tneconni [2003-11-12 22:58:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks sweetie!

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tneconni In reply to lilmejuju [2003-11-12 23:19:25 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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evcfenix [2003-11-12 15:28:31 +0000 UTC]

ooooo.... interesting. i like the way u made it into a two way story which merge into one. very vivid too. and the title's just fine if u ask me

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lilmejuju In reply to evcfenix [2003-11-12 15:31:26 +0000 UTC]

I know! He told me it was murder plain and simple. But murder can be courageous too.

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devur [2003-11-12 15:28:24 +0000 UTC]

I think the title works perfectly, I'm not sure what anyone else could've been thinking. Maybe they're thinking too shallowly; while what she did would never be considered courageous, she sees herself as brave. And I think she's really selfish: she didn't seem that worried over her daughter's well-being, only her own.

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Am I reading too much into this? If I am or not, I don't care, though do enlighten me.

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lilmejuju In reply to devur [2003-11-12 15:33:43 +0000 UTC]

lol no I don't think you are reading into it too much.

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