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Published: 2014-09-24 07:08:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 772; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Description The smell of the fire curls in my lungs, purring
like a tabby kitten. Roasting marshmallows
crisp on the ends of our sticks as I lean
against you, our heat mingling like the smoke
rising to the sky. Your eyes twinkle as you talk,
your hands gesturing widely, and the marshmallow
flies into the woods. We clutch our stomachs
as we laugh in harmony, our voices twining
together in the silence of the night.
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Comments: 37

haphazardmelody [2015-02-19 00:15:10 +0000 UTC]

First of all, this is just adorable. Second, I am absolutely in love with your line breaks. They are just perfect.

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LionesseRampant In reply to haphazardmelody [2015-02-20 23:39:47 +0000 UTC]

D'aaaawww. Thank you!

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ShadowedAcolyte [2014-10-03 16:47:32 +0000 UTC]

This was actually super-cute.

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LionesseRampant In reply to ShadowedAcolyte [2014-10-04 20:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

And thank you for the fave!

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somethingzenzen [2014-10-03 04:31:41 +0000 UTC]

Picturesque indeed! So evocative, it really is like being there, or as dunamisdave said, remembering an experience you never actually had. So many great lines/phrases in this.

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LionesseRampant In reply to somethingzenzen [2014-10-04 20:44:44 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you. I'm glad.

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cattservant [2014-09-27 19:18:41 +0000 UTC]

some moments
last forever
even when
the time is gone

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LionesseRampant In reply to cattservant [2014-10-01 23:32:07 +0000 UTC]

Huh.

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cattservant In reply to LionesseRampant [2014-10-02 02:07:16 +0000 UTC]

Huh? or Huh!
?

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LionesseRampant In reply to cattservant [2014-10-02 03:20:57 +0000 UTC]

Huh! (interesting. )

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cattservant In reply to LionesseRampant [2014-10-02 03:27:59 +0000 UTC]

Huh! (thank you!)Β  >^~o^πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

LionesseRampant In reply to cattservant [2014-10-02 06:40:43 +0000 UTC]

Huh! (you're welcome.)

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cattservant In reply to LionesseRampant [2014-10-02 06:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Huh!!!

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dunamisdave [2014-09-26 06:31:31 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous. Β Like a memory that I've never had.

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LionesseRampant In reply to dunamisdave [2014-09-27 17:52:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm honored.

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dunamisdave In reply to LionesseRampant [2014-09-28 05:47:48 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!Β 

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hopeburnsblue [2014-09-25 13:54:32 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeous and reminds me so much of Aggie Bonfire with an ex of mine. Very nostalgia-inducing, indeed!

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LionesseRampant In reply to hopeburnsblue [2014-09-26 05:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

What's Aggie Bonfire?

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hopeburnsblue In reply to LionesseRampant [2014-09-26 05:13:31 +0000 UTC]

You can Wiki it, too, but I think that'll be best explained by my journal entry about it, including pictures, history, personal anecdotes, and a link to a song I wrote inspired by it. I've also referenced it in a few of my poems, including my most recent one.

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LionesseRampant In reply to hopeburnsblue [2014-10-02 06:45:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh that sounds so lovely.

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Phan5everx2 [2014-09-25 04:06:12 +0000 UTC]

this is perfect

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LionesseRampant In reply to Phan5everx2 [2014-09-26 05:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh I'm glad you think so! That warms my heart.

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shep4life [2014-09-24 15:24:45 +0000 UTC]

I love fire! And camping..this is sweet

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LionesseRampant In reply to shep4life [2014-09-24 23:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

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shep4life In reply to LionesseRampant [2014-09-25 05:27:32 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome!

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LionesseRampant In reply to shep4life [2014-09-26 05:06:41 +0000 UTC]

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Haru2001 [2014-09-24 09:27:26 +0000 UTC]

I swear, of all the poems I read yours are the best

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LionesseRampant In reply to Haru2001 [2014-09-24 23:31:43 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh, you're too kind.

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copper9lives [2014-09-24 08:05:49 +0000 UTC]

What a joyous vignette!

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LionesseRampant In reply to copper9lives [2014-09-24 23:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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copper9lives In reply to LionesseRampant [2014-09-24 23:39:42 +0000 UTC]

Would love to toast marshmallows with you...Β  Β 

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LionesseRampant In reply to copper9lives [2014-09-25 00:10:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh that would be super fun!

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copper9lives In reply to LionesseRampant [2014-09-25 00:12:25 +0000 UTC]

You betcha! I have a huge repertory of campfire songs!

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LionesseRampant In reply to copper9lives [2014-09-25 01:56:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure!

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d-e-l-e-t-e-d [2014-09-24 07:41:09 +0000 UTC]

This is a very cute snapshot.

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LionesseRampant In reply to d-e-l-e-t-e-d [2014-09-24 23:31:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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d-e-l-e-t-e-d In reply to LionesseRampant [2014-09-25 03:26:05 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome.

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