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Published: 2006-11-12 20:05:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 119; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Her name is Maddie

I have to admit
this leather-bound love
is a curse
and while these chipped
finger nails move across
its textured surface
this confession is
followed by only an
infinite number of
queries and first
impressions

Her skin isn't yet
cancerous but just
a slowly filling
canvas of obscenities
that come like candy
to children
her tough, ivory and color
bound
outside
will be most
beautiful when it's 2 AM
and my dreams
make sense
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Comments: 10

bittersweet-insanity [2006-11-30 23:23:19 +0000 UTC]

oh my god, I absolutely adore this! It's so simple but it flows so well and mm... I just love it

... yes I am slow with my dAreading

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LipWriting In reply to bittersweet-insanity [2006-12-01 00:27:14 +0000 UTC]

It's okay. You're computer actually works now!

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Mondo-The-Maniac [2006-11-14 19:58:31 +0000 UTC]

What an awesome devotional.

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LipWriting In reply to Mondo-The-Maniac [2006-11-14 22:50:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya!

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TheKingofFall [2006-11-12 22:32:27 +0000 UTC]

I like it.

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Misplaced-Karma [2006-11-12 21:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Oooh....
I don't get a leatherjournal until Christmas.

You have most unique writing ever.

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LipWriting In reply to Misplaced-Karma [2006-11-12 22:29:21 +0000 UTC]

Uniqueness is good.

Yes. Maddie is part of my Christmasness.
<3

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madhatterzwei [2006-11-12 21:02:45 +0000 UTC]

Ooohh, I love your ending line. It's really pretty. <33 Can't wait to see Maddie!

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LipWriting In reply to madhatterzwei [2006-11-12 21:14:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank yas!

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split-screen-sadness [2006-11-12 20:34:07 +0000 UTC]

me likes quite a bit.

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