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Published: 2006-03-07 00:25:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 9
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Description Like birds
they sit upon perches
behind clean bards
and computer screens
screeching to be fed
chattering to be attended

Canaries
place their wings
around wood
trying to mold it
like clay
praying that their
bloody, splintered
feathers quit sticking

Parrots
flash bright colors
and suck smoke
to cough
to make sure
that lacey curtains burn
-it isn't about them-

Toucans
dream to reach canopies
and brag about close encounters
they peck at leaves
and cry at
those who call this home
they call upon butterflies
to gnaw on them
before Glitterwings is eaten

They are
like birds
in sterilized cages
in synthetic rainbows
in spiteful shadows
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Comments: 6

madhatterzwei [2006-03-08 11:09:51 +0000 UTC]

Interesting, though a ton more convoluted than your other pieces. Still great! It's not what I expected when I looked at the title. I still don't know who "they" are, though.

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LipWriting In reply to madhatterzwei [2006-03-08 22:16:20 +0000 UTC]

"they" refers to actually one person...if you get it right you get to see me dance in heels. (not hard on the guessing so not much of a prize) Convoluted eh? Interesting way to put it. Uhm... ?

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madhatterzwei In reply to LipWriting [2006-03-08 23:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, yeah. ^__^ I'm not to good with my poetry right now.

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LipWriting In reply to madhatterzwei [2006-03-09 00:34:12 +0000 UTC]

...too*... You're always wonderful with poetry by the way.

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LipWriting In reply to LipWriting [2006-03-13 01:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Can't have it all, eh?

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madhatterzwei In reply to LipWriting [2006-03-12 02:54:25 +0000 UTC]

If not always wonderful with grammar/spelling/whatever. >_<

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