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Published: 2006-02-09 23:21:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 60; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description Toll Booth

We are beneath sheets
and leaning against
plush
vulgar
mink
Our fingers are slipping
though eachother's
rings
to save each other
from falling into hell

Wearing turquoise
and violet
and yellow
making this day; night
collapse beneathe satin
call me sinner
call them saint
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Comments: 4

bittersweet-insanity [2006-02-09 23:30:07 +0000 UTC]

meh, I'm not liking this that much right now- though I have a feeling I will later- I like the idea a lot, especially the last two lines

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LipWriting In reply to bittersweet-insanity [2006-02-10 00:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Ah. It's cool. Thanks for the compliment on the last two lines though. ^_^

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bittersweet-insanity In reply to LipWriting [2006-02-10 02:13:06 +0000 UTC]

Ha, as I thought, I like it much better now! 👍: 0 ⏩: 1

LipWriting In reply to bittersweet-insanity [2006-02-10 02:20:51 +0000 UTC]

Hahahah. Thanks I guess! <-- That means awesomo.

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