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LiquidFaeStudios — LOS cover art concept sketch2
Published: 2011-07-26 19:57:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 2506; Favourites: 97; Downloads: 0
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version DOS. Its a lot better. but still not perfect. spent a bit more time with the coloring on this one. hopeuflly i will be able to figure out exactly what i want before i go to paint it.
her face is still a little wonky. but i can work on that. its better than before and so is her posture. I think i will need to move her hand down so that it is completely backed by the cape, as her fingers seem to disappear.
any a lot of progress, thanks to everyone who commented on the first one, it was a great help!
any other comments and crits are still welcomed! I will probably do at least one more line art - but i dont think i will need another digital color study unless i go nuts.
first one :
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Comments: 32
very great improvement from your first one. i love it
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This looks much better then the previous version, I like how you changed the angle of his head a little and his flowing hair. I would also take another color for her dress maybe something which would fit the owl
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HMMM you gave me an idea. Actually Im thinking about making the moon the main focus back there and making the owl a silhouette across the moon. - but you gave me an interesting idea of incorporating the colors and patterns of the owls feathers into her dress - that would be really neat!
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It's getting there! love the moon behind the owl..
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Thinking i might kill the big owl and just make it a moon back there, with an owl silhouette. I like the moon but its hard to "read" and feels rather cluttered. that and the owl i don't think has a big enough part in the story to reserve that much cover space. LOL
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Then by all means silhouette the owl, and make the moon more pronounced.
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This must have taken awhile! You're very ambitious! 
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hmm, actually it only took a few hours XD - a long time for a sketch, yes!
and lol @ the owl.
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There's so much improvement in this- the other one was good but this one is fantastic.
I would like to see some more detail in the owl's wings. You've done his face so well, the wings look fake compared to it.
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well like i said its still just a sketch. the actual piece will be done in watercolor
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I like this version much better as well. And I kinda like her facial expression.
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i still feel as though it is not perfect, but it is close....
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After clicking back and forth between the versions, I like this one better. The softer appearance of the owl's face is really what draws me into this piece. Makes it more... mysterious, I guess you could say?
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Very good. The line-quality is so much better and I love how atmospheric it is.
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well since its just a sketch i wasnt really worried about line quality in either of them, haha. but i did spend a bit more time on this one to get the feeling clear.
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beautiful..love it! The one thing that is bothering me on it is the half a C on her breast. I think maybe smaller . It just looks very out of place. Love the dress! Love it love it!
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hows that? and i played with his hair :3 woosh
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lol well it probably wont even be there in the painting since most of the lines are for guiding only XD
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