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CassieBear22 [2015-07-06 20:17:58 +0000 UTC]

Moooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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goodchaos [2015-06-15 15:58:39 +0000 UTC]

Just Found this comic! I Love It!!!<3 <3

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xxyuniexx [2015-06-15 04:43:26 +0000 UTC]

the end of another chapter! well done! also just to help you out with the english, on pg 160 panel 4 it is spelled "completed" and the fifth panel the "most" should be "must" to read "she must have died..." =]

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PokeStar235 [2015-06-15 04:34:12 +0000 UTC]

aww i wish i was there to give sasuke a hug.poor guy looks sad

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NazNiz [2015-06-13 07:44:08 +0000 UTC]

Awww, sad Sasuke is so cute... I wanna pet him.

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Victorica7602 [2015-06-13 06:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!! so Awesome!

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Arisu-ArtnFics [2015-06-13 00:03:50 +0000 UTC]

Jeje eso sólo era una prueba de Jiraiya-sensei... XD XD
pobres...
pero que rico... se ve Naruto protestando con la colita.... >< ><
y la expresión de Sasuke...
cuando lo caya... >< ><
te quedó genial.... ^^ ^^

Y osea ero-senin conocía también a Mikoto??
lo has dejado bien interesante...

Espero puedas continuarlo pronto...
Ya quiero saber que pasará... >< ><

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CalmFluffy [2015-06-12 20:39:19 +0000 UTC]

There are two minor spelling mistakes I think, but I'm not an english master

Page 159, Mid Left Panel it should be "that restrain his abilities"

Page 160, Top Right Panel it should be "His entire body is covered ..."

Regardless of that, keep going. I'm always looking forward to your work!

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