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Published: 2013-02-14 15:03:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 474; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 6
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Description re-submitting an older work. hopefully I'll get more response as the last time
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mh-creative [2013-02-15 17:33:24 +0000 UTC]

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It's a very nice storytelling picture. I really like how you catched the pose of the dog. The blur in the background is good, could be even a bit more but it's ok. It's almoust impossible to plan such things when you have to react in such a short timeframe.
You should leave a bit more space on the right so that the dog is complete inside the frame.

My personal taste: you should stop using this instagram-like - crossprocess style
Try this picture in black/white. I read one "If the color is not important for the story, remove" This would be a perfect example for this.

but overall - a very good picture.

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mh-creative In reply to mh-creative [2013-02-15 17:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Maybe. Thats why b/w doesn't work on all pictures. But it's the same on cross-process. On the right picture - perfect.
The color should fit to the story.

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lisarime In reply to mh-creative [2013-02-15 17:37:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

I try many different styles of editing, but almots everytime in my eyes the colorful one wins. I don't really like b/w photos, the are so lifeless... :/

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XenaTheWarriorQueen [2013-02-14 19:19:19 +0000 UTC]

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I like the photo its angel looks right and your model is stunning your background is amazing as well but the downside is you cat really see the eyes some people like to be able to see the eyes an the life and expression behind them I for one am one of those people who immediately look at the eyes but you have an amazing picture nonetheless. your background is a slight bit too blurry try to add some of the clarity of the background sometimes it makes the picture look good sometimes it doesnt but yet again its usually about trial and error

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lisarime In reply to XenaTheWarriorQueen [2013-02-14 19:23:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you but it was a bit difficult to read, why don't you use punctuation? lol

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XenaTheWarriorQueen In reply to lisarime [2013-02-14 19:28:38 +0000 UTC]

sorry my punctuation is not the greatest niether is my spelling and your very welcome. feel free to take a look at my work if you wish to and comment on it if you want

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JackalyenMystique [2013-02-17 02:26:26 +0000 UTC]

You're dog is very lovely. I'm sorry that it only got one comment before. Such a great photograph should get more recognition. What's your dog's name?

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lisarime In reply to JackalyenMystique [2013-02-17 12:32:29 +0000 UTC]

He's called Lykos, which is greek for wolf (: thank you!

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JackalyenMystique In reply to lisarime [2013-02-17 17:43:21 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. How is Lykos doing?

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lisarime In reply to JackalyenMystique [2013-02-17 18:28:03 +0000 UTC]

he's fine, just getting older and few problems with his back. however, he's a funny dog. ^^

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JackalyenMystique In reply to lisarime [2013-02-17 21:22:19 +0000 UTC]

It's good to hear that he's doing fine at least.

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Insane-Redhead [2013-02-16 02:24:54 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful dog. Reminds me of my long-haired German Shepherd.

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lisarime In reply to Insane-Redhead [2013-02-17 12:31:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you :3 what is his/her name?

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Insane-Redhead In reply to lisarime [2013-02-18 02:58:03 +0000 UTC]

His name is Jerry.

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Ardgy [2013-02-15 17:21:03 +0000 UTC]

great photo, the angle of view is nice

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lisarime In reply to Ardgy [2013-02-15 17:22:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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dauntlesschick [2013-02-15 03:00:53 +0000 UTC]

wow! i love the color contrast! (not just saying that cause im a dog lover btw) Its a cute pose by the dog too.

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lisarime In reply to dauntlesschick [2013-02-15 08:46:49 +0000 UTC]

thank you c:

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F-Lagerdahl [2013-02-14 19:13:01 +0000 UTC]

Lovely dog and what a lovely photograph, I adore the colours and the brightness of it, wonderful work. Too bad to hear it got bad reponse last time it was submitted for sure don't deserve such! I will feature it in my next journal update!

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lisarime In reply to F-Lagerdahl [2013-02-14 19:17:46 +0000 UTC]

omg, thank you very much <3 ya, last time it only got one comment

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F-Lagerdahl In reply to lisarime [2013-02-18 16:53:42 +0000 UTC]

Well it happen sometimes, the only thing to do is submit to clubs and show yourself around deviantart, the more active you are the more actively people visit your page, I learned that the hard way and also by being active with Getwatchers and over all in groups and so on, you see some wonderful art and sometimes stumble upon wonderful people who can become real close friends.

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lisarime In reply to F-Lagerdahl [2013-02-19 18:28:39 +0000 UTC]

yeah, I try to get more active. but somehow the english language is an great barrier for me to get really in touch with the people :/

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F-Lagerdahl In reply to lisarime [2013-02-19 18:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Is that so? I believe your english is really fine, seen people with a lot worse english do just fine! ^^

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lisarime In reply to F-Lagerdahl [2013-02-19 18:46:24 +0000 UTC]

I read this a lot, thank you :3 but somehow it is really hard for me to get into that community. it would be so much better in german (i'm on a german forum and there I wrote tutorials and got into the photography team - even though it's only an offtopic section ^^' )

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F-Lagerdahl In reply to lisarime [2013-02-19 22:51:36 +0000 UTC]

Well I believe there is german clubs around and groups that you can join if you wish, sure dA is a english speaking community but there is chances to get German groups too.

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lisarime In reply to F-Lagerdahl [2013-02-19 23:06:46 +0000 UTC]

yeah, there are some but definitely too less!

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F-Lagerdahl In reply to lisarime [2013-02-20 00:44:12 +0000 UTC]

I myself keep away from Swedish groups in general, I meet far too many wonderful people over all!

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