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Published: 2013-12-30 17:29:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description Transferring heat to her cold body,
Murmuring things unto her deaf ears,
Searching desperately for a pulse to beat,
Dread struck as realization sunk in.

Gritting your teeth, frustration building,
How could you live, she's dead already,
Pulling out a poison, we know where this is heading,
Drink, so yours too will be a dead body.

Glancing one last time to see her pretty face,
What a shock, she's twitching in her case!
Too late, mouth already bubbling,
He'll soon be dead, oh this is troubling!

His eyes rolled up,
No, there's no more hope.
Ooh, what irony!
He's dead already.

Time has been too late,
Fate has been too cruel,
Star-crossed lovers within the living,
As it was destined from the beginning.

They parted without goodbye,
Days passed without the other nearby.
Only to meet under the night sky,
One had died, and the other left to cry.

She held on to his sword,
Cold to touch, hard to hold,
Raising it to her chest,
Trying hard to do her best,

Not to fear her nearing demise,
Wanting to do it fast and presise,
Now prepared to roll the dice,
Be dead as she had disguised.
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Comments: 10

Zelika-Okami [2013-12-30 18:41:26 +0000 UTC]

The poem is... so dramatic and I got the feels. (Lol >w<) I love it!

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litaxken In reply to Zelika-Okami [2013-12-30 18:52:52 +0000 UTC]

Haha^_^ Thank you. 

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AsakoBunny [2013-12-30 17:39:03 +0000 UTC]

Quite good.

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litaxken In reply to AsakoBunny [2013-12-30 17:48:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.°v°

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AsakoBunny In reply to litaxken [2013-12-30 17:53:39 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~!

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ItsKocot [2013-12-30 17:37:25 +0000 UTC]

Pretty... Though I'm confused as to whether there's meant to be a rhyming scheme or not...

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litaxken In reply to ItsKocot [2013-12-30 17:45:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I guess I've submitted this to the wrong folder then... Where  do you suggest to put this though? I don't have much knowledge when it comes to classifying which types they go to.

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ItsKocot In reply to litaxken [2013-12-31 01:08:42 +0000 UTC]

I... I would not know. I'm still quite new to deviantART myself. I'm not saying that there's not a rhyming scheme,  I'm just confused as to whether you intended one.

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litaxken In reply to ItsKocot [2013-12-31 04:50:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh, haha. Well, I don't know. It was sort of made unconsciously like that.

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ItsKocot In reply to litaxken [2013-12-31 04:54:47 +0000 UTC]

Well, it was unconsciously excellent! Made me think, and if there's one thing that I like more than anything else on the planet, that's sleeping... Er, I mean, thinking.

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