GraphicsGeeks [2015-05-31 08:29:23 +0000 UTC]
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There's a great atmosphere to this piece. You wonder what this girl has been through in her tough life. She has an almost mona-lisa-eque look in her face where you can't tell if she's happy or sad - but you know she's deep in thought about something.The composition is excellent. The focus begins on the subject's face, then drawing to the very cool rear bumper and tires, then you're taken wistfully into the background to explore the world in your own imagination.A good understanding of lens theory has been used to create depth in this image. The foreground and backgrounds have an excellent bokeh. One thing that could have improved this piece is a slight lens bur on the steering wheel area and front area of the bike. This would have added even more sense of perspective to the main character, and her BEAST.I love the wind picking up the dust in the background. That's a wonderful touch.The only thing that doesn't stand out for me is the green foreground on the right. It seems to fill the space unnecessarily. With so much saturation and low detail, all it does is pull me away from the main composition. A negative space might have created a more natural sense of imbalance. There is no imperative to fill all space on a canvas - less could be more!Overall the image is incredible. I want to hop on that bike with her and explore this harsh, unforgiving world for myself!
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Alexis-Croft [2015-05-26 19:24:14 +0000 UTC]
wooow... hammer Bild wie immer!
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Lodchen In reply to Alexis-Croft [2015-05-30 09:39:27 +0000 UTC]
Danke ^-^ Wie gehts dir so?^^
Alexis-Croft In reply to Lodchen [2015-06-01 19:50:04 +0000 UTC]
bitte bitte Guut und selbst?
emeraldbeam [2015-05-26 11:27:42 +0000 UTC]
wow! That's so epic and amazing! I love her pose and expression too
Lodchen In reply to emeraldbeam [2015-05-30 09:39:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much :3 It really means a lot to me that you always leave these nice comments
emeraldbeam In reply to Lodchen [2015-05-31 13:44:00 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome ^_^ You deserve all my nice comments my friend I don't give negative feedback because I don't want to hurt the artist's feelings. hehe!! I'm a nice person after all XD
MitchThe1Soul [2015-05-26 00:52:35 +0000 UTC]
Wicked cool!
Lodchen In reply to MitchThe1Soul [2015-05-30 09:37:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!