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HidaAtarasi [2015-05-31 13:55:43 +0000 UTC]
Practice makes perfect, but obsession makes better.
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AraghenXD [2015-05-31 11:11:02 +0000 UTC]
Eye looks fine to me.
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lonelyzentai In reply to AraghenXD [2015-05-31 14:23:48 +0000 UTC]
I don't know... It feels weird because I feel like the image has lost something when ported over to a sketch - there's a certain ethos to the image that is no longer captured in this form.
The cliche states that the eye is the window to the soul, and properly rendering the eye, i think, is extremely important to capturing the character as well. The shine of her suit also adds to her beauty, but that is lost in my rendition of her form.
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YppleJax In reply to lonelyzentai [2015-05-31 16:37:17 +0000 UTC]
I think it might be the perspective of her chin being tipped down and looking slightly up at the camera that is missing, and that's what is making the eye look different? Still good tho!
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lonelyzentai In reply to YppleJax [2015-05-31 17:22:56 +0000 UTC]
Hmm yeah - the chin IS kinda weird. How do you make perspective with flat sketching though /: I need to figure out shading soon.
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YppleJax In reply to lonelyzentai [2015-05-31 20:45:36 +0000 UTC]
Just vertical compression I guess? But without shading it will still probably look weird unless you get it exactly right.
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