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Published: 2019-03-21 00:30:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 160277; Favourites: 3662; Downloads: 425
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playing around some with Stormy and Zipperflash's rivalry and respective backstories, trying to flesh them out a bit more


1.) "I wanna be just like you, Mama!"

Perhaps it was just coincidence that Lightning Dust disbanded her extreme aeronautics team, The Washouts, after a bad stunt landed her only child her in the hospital.

2.)
For most of Stormy's life, he was content being a scrawny hippie, happily strumming his ukulele and snoozing on top of clouds. He didn't gel with his parents' emphasis on competition and athleticism....Stormy's always been a go-with-the-flow kind of guy. At least, that's how he'd describe himself.....Mama Dash would probably use words like "ridiculously lazy" and "zero ambition".

Stormy's always been kind of a D student, but his difficulty with school becomes insurmountable as he enters his teens. He has some complex learning issues (dyslexia, ADHD) that have gone hidden and undiagnosed, as well as a lot of academic anxiety that pushes him to the brink of flunking out. Not especially confident in his ability to prevent that, Stormy opts to drop out and join Wonderbolt Academy. Flying is easier than literary analysis, after all.

3.) Oh wait no, turns out flight school is actually really hard? Sergeant Spitfire isn't a very patient pony, especially when it comes to hippie-dippie idiots that'd rather cloud-watch than compete.

4.) Time passes. Stormy doesn't like the Wonderbolt standard-issue haircut for new recruits, he doesn't like the emphasis on conformity and deference to authority, he doesn't especially like Sergeant Spitfire and her love of barking orders in his ears. But he does like that Rainbow seems to be genuinely proud of him now. Stormy's a naturally fast flier, and as he trains under Spitfire and Rainbow, he's able to outclass his peers with ease. With a bit more effort, Stormy starts smashing speed records left and right. He wins a medal, then fifteen more to match. To his surprise, he begins amassing a fan following. "Aerostorm" becomes a well-known name among Wonderbolt enthusiasts....and Stormy, for the first time in his life, develops a bit of an ego....

5.) And then young new hotshot Zipperflash promptly stomps it into the ground. His speed is so ludicrous that Stormy's left in the dust, wondering what in the hell just happened. Who is this guy?

(little does Stormy know, Zipperflash is actually a huge fan (with a huge crush): )

6.) After suffering under Zip's bold taunts and smug victories, Stormy decided that not only would he beat Zips in a race, he'll also make him cry. He puts his all into their next race, and in the final lap, Stormy surges into first place in an explosive burst of speed, so intense it generates lightning. Zipperflash is struck by a stray bolt and sent crashing down, and for a while, things look very grim.

7.) The crash is ruled an accident, and Stormy is ruled the fair victor. But he can't enjoy any part of it, because he almost killed someone. He was so caught up in winning and training and being the best that Zipperflash could have died. Should have died. Stormy's so sick with shame that he can't eat. He misses practice. Won't show his face to anypony. Won't give an interview. Can't sleep.

He sends lots of flowers and apology cards to Zips in the hospital, but it does little to soothe his mind. Finally, he summons the courage to visit his rival, give Zipperflash his golden medal, and announce that he's quitting racing, forever.

Zipperflash is angry and hurt. Not about the accident- after all, injuries are inherent to his career- but because Stormy, his rival, his long-admired hero, just up and fucking quit. After one little hiccup. Zips will recover and be back in the air in no time, so what's the big goddamn deal? Why can't Aero look him in the eye? What a coward. What a rotten, miserable goddamn quitter. Zips doesn't need him to be the best. He'll be the best damned flier in the world, no stupid rivalry necessary.

....Did Zips do something wrong?

After Stormy retires in shame, he wanders around Equestria, doing odd jobs, jumping into reckless, ill-fitting relationships (*cough*Chakra Blossom*coughcough*), searching for something to fill the void in his life and give him a sense of purpose. It isn't until years later- when he befriends an old classmate, Bruce- that he begins feeling brave enough to start flying again (mostly because Bruce wouldn't stop badgering him about it, "You mean ya used to be a world-class flier and you just quit?"). I imagine his rematch race with Zipperflash would be hyped to hell and back by the pegasi of Cloudsdale, with everypony, especially Zips himself, eagerly anticipating Aero's return (Zips can't wait, he's really upped the game on his trash talk and he totally isn't going to get all stupid and star-struck again no sir)



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Comments: 135

Nautilus18 [2020-03-27 11:56:58 +0000 UTC]

"a bad stunt landed her only child in the hospital."

How was Lightning able to avoid being charged with child endangerment? Did she let him do it or was it something he did without her permission trying to imitate one of her stunts?

And what does Lightning do now that she disbanded the Washouts?

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rimic666 [2020-03-20 05:15:31 +0000 UTC]

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Artisticanalysis [2020-01-10 04:27:46 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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Lopoddity In reply to Artisticanalysis [2020-02-07 23:22:12 +0000 UTC]

....What on earth are you talking about, dude? This is some drawings about two horses that fly fast.

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kingofswing617 In reply to Artisticanalysis [2020-01-12 04:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Could you maybe give some specific examples?

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Artisticanalysis In reply to kingofswing617 [2020-01-13 01:36:18 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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Lopoddity In reply to Artisticanalysis [2020-02-07 23:26:06 +0000 UTC]

"On Lop's Tumblr account she asserts that men marry women so that they could have children to turn into slaves and house servants."


Not only have I never said this, I've never even thought it. That's utterly inane. You are projecting. A lot. It's astounding.

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kingofswing617 In reply to Artisticanalysis [2020-01-13 04:23:25 +0000 UTC]

I mean Lop may focus on and prefer gay ships, but there are plenty of straight relationships that are healthy and dont portray the men in a bad light. Most of the mane six ships are straight (Twicord, Pinkie and cheese, Dash and Dumbell, Fluttershy and Bulk.) What your talking about is Cuthhroat. Cutthroat is only one character. And as for your second point, thats Huck's family. Just because Lop writes one of two characters that have background like these doesnt mean she think everyone is like this.Β 

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Artisticanalysis In reply to kingofswing617 [2020-01-14 16:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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AviRayburn In reply to Artisticanalysis [2020-01-27 13:46:16 +0000 UTC]

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kingofswing617 In reply to Artisticanalysis [2020-01-17 17:57:53 +0000 UTC]

This doesnt seem like its about the Mlp fandom's feelings, its about you and what bothers you regarding her work. As for whether or not art is political, it depends on how deepy you analyze it. People can interpret things in different ways. You can feel that a work has implications that says something that author may or not mean

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Willow--Productions In reply to kingofswing617 [2020-05-08 21:15:39 +0000 UTC]

Judging by the responses, I am so glad I missed whatever comment this convo was replying to

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rimic666 In reply to Artisticanalysis [2020-01-11 02:17:27 +0000 UTC]

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CrowNym In reply to rimic666 [2020-03-20 02:16:11 +0000 UTC]

me too, dude, me too

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IAmSwagg [2019-09-02 02:48:27 +0000 UTC]

Firstly, awesome job. Always love your style and I really enjoy these two characters playing off each other. Second, please tell me there's an AU where Stormy and Zips are just super competitive rivals all the time because that would be amazing.

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insanegoldie2 [2019-06-17 22:49:46 +0000 UTC]

Full body hoof and body cast

*breath*

DRINKING THROUGH A STRAW

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Nautilus18 [2019-06-12 04:56:26 +0000 UTC]

Lightning Dust should have stuck Zipperflash on the bunny hill version of their stunts.

I was thinking β€œwho would let their child do something like this” but then I remembered who his mother was. Zips also seems to be pretty durable.

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Attack-At-Dawn [2019-06-07 16:51:17 +0000 UTC]

I have to say, I absolutely love your design of Zip and Aero's racing Outfits! especially those lighting on zip's feet! I LOVE IT!

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BattyBluthers13 [2019-05-18 20:18:50 +0000 UTC]

...I ONLY MEANT TO BEAT THE CHICKEN BOY! NOT HURT CHICKEN BOY D : )

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MightyMorphinPower4 [2019-04-27 11:29:39 +0000 UTC]

Nice ork

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BBwolf13 [2019-04-11 01:15:39 +0000 UTC]

So, is it canon that Zipperflash is trans?

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Lopoddity In reply to BBwolf13 [2019-04-11 01:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Yep! I decided on it a while ago, but I don’t think I ever made a big announcement or anything. Zips is canonically a trans stallion. :>

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BBwolf13 In reply to Lopoddity [2019-04-29 11:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh my lord that's awesome! I love that!

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CitrusEucalyptus [2019-04-05 00:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow.

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xandraclay [2019-04-02 20:31:17 +0000 UTC]

Oooo! Dramatic!


I love that his lightning matches his hair color.Β 

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Henshin777 [2019-03-31 20:44:40 +0000 UTC]

Great job.

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KaCy-SC [2019-03-28 22:04:30 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing how you evolved, I get a lot of inspiration from your drawings. Your current dash is wonderful. *w*

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zukos-swig [2019-03-27 11:46:56 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, absolutely nothing like a Lop headcanon, they're my fav! ^_^ A+ backstory, and the art is gorgeous as always! Thank you!

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Sumi--Chan [2019-03-26 23:49:30 +0000 UTC]

whenever I read that Aero calls Zipper "chicken-boy" I can't help but hear it in Mushu's voice from Mulan.Β 

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faintsolus [2019-03-26 17:10:26 +0000 UTC]

I love how you nailed the horse anatomy in this!

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Cloverdeer [2019-03-26 07:53:44 +0000 UTC]

WOw! That was thrilling to read! And stormy looks so cute/handsome when he was younger.~ These short synopsis' really do flesh out his story and I'm interested in learning more.

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Dashiell0 [2019-03-24 11:39:46 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely amazing, getting to see how these two rivals fight to death(almost)!

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DragonetXime [2019-03-23 18:09:40 +0000 UTC]

I loved this fleshed out version of Stormy's career, it feels real and tangible. For a sensitive soul like him an accident that almost killed someone because of his desire to leave them in the dust would leave him feeling like a rotten prideful bastard even if that isn't true at all...


Zips being left out in the cold completely thrown off by the just backing off when literally his whole life it has been hammered down that even if he loses or gets hurt he can't give up, of course wouldn't understand. Poor guy. I would love to see an image of Stormy's return race and Zips eager taunts


How does it look like, Stormy's electrical flight storm??



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StarDustJolteon [2019-03-23 01:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Does Stormy ever find out about Zipp's being his fan/ having a huge crush on him? if so how did Stormy react to the news?

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Godzillamaster69 [2019-03-23 01:19:17 +0000 UTC]

Something about Zipperflash just brought out the worst in Stormy.

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MysticNightVA [2019-03-22 21:12:15 +0000 UTC]

Awww, that image of Zipperflash with the injured wing made me had the feels.Β  Then the feels got deeper when I saw all the gifts that Stormy gave to try to make up for it.Β  My heart!!!

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H0TAR0 [2019-03-22 16:35:11 +0000 UTC]

AHH i love your boys

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Light-Dusk [2019-03-22 04:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Do Stormy's eyes change color, or did I miss something?

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nejtix In reply to Light-Dusk [2019-11-22 19:29:33 +0000 UTC]

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JAMS267 In reply to Light-Dusk [2019-03-22 04:26:46 +0000 UTC]

He’s got heterochromia.

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Lopoddity In reply to Light-Dusk [2019-03-22 04:26:21 +0000 UTC]

he's got heterochromia:


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Light-Dusk In reply to Lopoddity [2019-03-27 10:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Ah, missed something then. Thanks.

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CANTERLOCK [2019-03-22 04:11:49 +0000 UTC]

Yay, lightning dust!

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Daggerflash [2019-03-22 02:28:56 +0000 UTC]

This was both cute as well as sad. I LOVE IT!!!

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desenhera [2019-03-22 00:31:40 +0000 UTC]

poor babus

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crazyFANATIC869 [2019-03-21 23:52:35 +0000 UTC]

Does Aero actually like racing or does he keep at it because of his mom

Is that what his special talent is?

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Lopoddity In reply to crazyFANATIC869 [2019-03-22 00:11:14 +0000 UTC]

Yep, Aero’s talent is speed, and he actually loves flying! He just doesn’t have an especially competitive personality (unless provoked, which Zipperflash is talented at doing)

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crazyFANATIC869 In reply to Lopoddity [2019-03-25 19:43:31 +0000 UTC]

After he jumps back into flying is he going to start racing again?

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Redpandawarriorgirl [2019-03-21 23:48:49 +0000 UTC]

i'm not judging your past art style AT ALL, because I love your mlp verse and the characters within, but would you ever consider redoing the little portraits where you say: "next gen shown" to show their updated looks? i swear i'm not trying to be mean or anything i just feel like some of their portraits *coughcough* stormy *cough cough* don't really look like how you draw them now? i'm sorry, please don't hurt me

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Lopoddity In reply to Redpandawarriorgirl [2019-03-22 00:16:43 +0000 UTC]

I don’t understand what you’re saying. Their looks haven’t updated, it’s just that my drawing style has changed.Β 
(That said, I should probably update those old sheets on Ember and Misty and etc)

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