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Lord-Kiyo β€” Jake and Mike

Published: 2010-04-23 11:35:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1748; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 37
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Description This is something I had for a while now. I was debating if I should show people this at all.

These are characters from my book "Munoraku" on the left is Jake, and the right is Mike. They both are brothers, fighting against the empire.

These two guys where supposed to be ruling a country but the empire took it over, and these two where separated. Mike is the one that stayed with his father to train. you sure can tell the difference on how they where raised

This maybe become a book a may publish, I don't know. I would have to go over it and fix some of the errors first.
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Lord-Kiyo In reply to ??? [2018-09-25 00:09:23 +0000 UTC]

A helmet would add weight and block his vision.Β  His armor is meant to be lightweight and allow him to move quickly.

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madquack64 In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2018-09-25 23:02:53 +0000 UTC]

That's more logical than the reasonΒ that's usually given you don't get an answer, Mister.Β Β 

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Fox-Lightning [2010-04-23 21:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Win for camo pants! that's all I have to say

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Fox-Lightning [2010-04-26 11:16:21 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Centro [2010-04-23 21:12:27 +0000 UTC]

I like them o.o Both are cute looking, one is a sniper, the others a warrior. One is kind of clean the others is a street-wiser version of the other? XD I love both their designs. But armor without fabric or chain mail underneath for extra protection? O.o bad idea in the long run. But awesome pic! :3

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Centro [2010-04-26 11:15:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Jake is for long range while Mike is close range.

Anyway, Mike has light armor, so he can move swiftly, and that fabric is part of the armor. Jake was supposed to wear heavy armor that is full body. but he did not want it.

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Centro In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-27 18:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Ah. Makes perfect sense XD. My classification is artillery sniper. You know, able to gun anything down at extreme ranges XD. Portable particle beam weapons are so much fun! Too bad about not wearing full armor though, it'd have been cooler!

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Centro [2010-04-27 19:13:50 +0000 UTC]

Well Jake does have a particle sniper but he feels that armor is just not his style.

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Centro In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-28 14:05:10 +0000 UTC]

XD. Nice! >.< I want to commission you now but, Icelandic volcano and all o.o and yes I live in Iceland, far enough away from that temper tantrum volcano mczeus though XD.

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Centro [2010-04-28 14:16:59 +0000 UTC]

you live in Iceland? Wow! and I just heard about that volcano this morning. and saw all kinds of pics. there some real shaggy horses over there and people try to say evolution don't exist.

okay back on topic. you know my commission info?

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Centro In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-29 16:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Nope! I don't ^^' >.< I have a really rather complex character profile. High-adopter of mechanical augmentations, military-industrial complex grade component replacements. And yeah, we have shaggy horses :3 Real sturdy, strong ones. But that damn volcanos temper tantrum wont stop till three weeks from now most likely, luckily the capitol area is unaffected due to the wind, if it changes even a little, well I know I wanted snow but... You catch my drift.

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Centro [2010-04-29 17:32:00 +0000 UTC]

go in this [link] and find the commission section. and then note me with some info.

and hope things will stay good on your side of that land mass.

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Centro In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-05-04 23:02:58 +0000 UTC]

Here's hoping! I'll look into that commission thing! Hopefully I can find a way to commission you ^^. Thanks for the link!

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Daxam-VII [2010-04-23 20:44:53 +0000 UTC]

KOOL they look awesome i like the way jake looks alot

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Daxam-VII [2010-04-23 20:48:08 +0000 UTC]

I figuerd most people like Jakes outfit the most.

Mike was trying to get Jake to wear the family armor, and Jake was like "NO WAY!"

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Daxam-VII In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-23 20:53:12 +0000 UTC]

hahaha mike looks awesome too i really like his sword

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Johnyvill [2010-04-23 20:01:47 +0000 UTC]

they are blind... arent they?

awesome job

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Johnyvill [2010-04-23 20:03:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, they can see better than humans. those eyes are good for seeing in pitch black, and real bright light.

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Johnyvill In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-23 20:06:39 +0000 UTC]

hm... cool

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Johnyvill [2010-04-23 20:10:58 +0000 UTC]

it explained a bit more in the book. so if I do publish you will see it there.

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Johnyvill In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-23 20:24:39 +0000 UTC]

cool cant wait
*starts waiting*

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Johnyvill [2010-04-23 20:36:38 +0000 UTC]

don't hold your breath though, it may not happen at all, I don't know.

by the way I sent the e-mail, did you get it?

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Johnyvill In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-23 20:44:12 +0000 UTC]

OH I for got about that hold on... alright I got it and the file is away ... I hope

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Johnyvill [2010-04-23 20:54:45 +0000 UTC]

still got nothing.

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Johnyvill In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-23 21:04:41 +0000 UTC]

hmm... I would really like to know what is going on with this crappy thing >: (

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Johnyvill [2010-04-26 11:32:08 +0000 UTC]

Try sending something to me without an atachment. and see if I get it then.

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Johnyvill In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-27 02:01:47 +0000 UTC]

okee dokee then

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DragonQuestHero [2010-04-23 19:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Really nice job.
I love the coloring of the armor. It really looks like armor.

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to DragonQuestHero [2010-04-23 19:41:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks some of the armor could have been better though, like the bottoms.

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NavelColt [2010-04-23 18:00:46 +0000 UTC]

More cool characters Nice expressions x3

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to NavelColt [2010-04-23 18:15:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Volk-Cole-Dragoona [2010-04-23 16:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Sweet. I would buy the book if it ever came out.

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Volk-Cole-Dragoona [2010-04-23 17:32:16 +0000 UTC]

but you don't even know what it about. how do you know it anything you would like?

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Volk-Cole-Dragoona In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-23 21:28:10 +0000 UTC]

I have liked all your stories so I would not think twice about buying it.

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to Volk-Cole-Dragoona [2010-04-26 11:32:51 +0000 UTC]

okay, but there no Sonic or Tails in it though :LOL:

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Volk-Cole-Dragoona In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-26 16:20:53 +0000 UTC]

I think OC stories are the best!

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JadenItanenn [2010-04-23 16:38:08 +0000 UTC]

one look at them, and i have one thing to say....why are there eyes white? oh..and i woundnt want to fight eaither of them....at close rang that is.

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to JadenItanenn [2010-04-23 17:29:59 +0000 UTC]

I was wondering if someone would ask about there eyes. I can't tell you everything. but there race is caled Spa. and there eyes are able to see in pitch black, and real bright light.

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JadenItanenn In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-23 18:12:11 +0000 UTC]

hmm...instering...what would happen if they were in a dark cave...and a flashbang went off? my guess, the same thing that happens to everything...but that they can see in bright and dark...now that is cool

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to JadenItanenn [2010-04-23 18:15:18 +0000 UTC]

there eyes adjust real fast. but mostly because there eyes don't fully function on the principal of light.

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JadenItanenn In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-23 18:25:41 +0000 UTC]

0.o then what do they follow?
and please do publish your book(s), they sound like good reads

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to JadenItanenn [2010-04-23 18:37:05 +0000 UTC]

I don't know. in order to be bought they had to be commercialized or something.

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Stripes-the-Raccoon [2010-04-23 16:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Cool stuff. <3

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JEFFRON [2010-04-23 15:09:29 +0000 UTC]

No doubt lol best of luck to the both of em,and may the pwoer of being brothers kick so much ass (I have a brother myself)

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to JEFFRON [2010-04-23 17:22:19 +0000 UTC]

yeah they work well with each other. That's when they where together. They lost Jake.

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spike4893 [2010-04-23 12:43:26 +0000 UTC]

sweet man awsome job

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DJtthreestDX342 [2010-04-23 11:40:26 +0000 UTC]

ok.... mike looks totaly wierd and jakes cool

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Lord-Kiyo In reply to DJtthreestDX342 [2010-04-23 11:44:38 +0000 UTC]

It's all that light weight armor that makes him look weird.

Jake is like any teen and he partys all night when he not on watch duty

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DJtthreestDX342 In reply to Lord-Kiyo [2010-04-23 11:47:19 +0000 UTC]

l0l

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cwayz [2010-04-23 11:36:42 +0000 UTC]

They look like powerrangers.... but cooler

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