Comments: 10
horaciosi [2011-04-19 02:52:03 +0000 UTC]
nice
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
DarkTragedy [2008-09-22 09:48:43 +0000 UTC]
i like this its a good standing profile now put him into action and adds some flava like him slicing someones head in half....just being picky fix his right knee pad its a bit off and since your goin with the whole Asian esque theme give him a flap for the crothch..maybe..thats just an idea. his legs seem a bit long doing that could make them appear more stable besides that love the costume love the design want to see him slicing someone
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
LordJay In reply to DarkTragedy [2008-09-22 16:50:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique man, I think after I get all the 5 characters that are being commissioned done I might make some action scenes involving them either fighting each other or taking on some soldiers or something. You should give me a character idea I still have a slot open ^.^
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Nemonus [2008-09-22 03:20:52 +0000 UTC]
As they say, 'most impressive'. The three-dimentionality of his shoulder-plates, as well as the muddy colors that contrast with the bright sun-lit sky in the back, really caught my eye. His feet look a little too far apart, that's all the concrit I can manage.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
gravnar [2008-09-21 10:37:42 +0000 UTC]
Looks amazing! Thanks!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
LordJay In reply to gravnar [2008-09-21 23:46:07 +0000 UTC]
your welcome ^.^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
gravnar In reply to LordJay [2008-09-24 19:43:25 +0000 UTC]
Do you ever plan on doing anything else like this?
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
ShadowWolfX1 [2008-09-21 05:42:10 +0000 UTC]
Sorry that is to say Lightsaber Katars. I see he is holding them.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
ShadowWolfX1 In reply to ShadowWolfX1 [2008-09-21 05:45:03 +0000 UTC]
Arguably it'd just be a Lightkatar. It wouldn't really qualify as a saber anymore. Don't mind me thought I'm fairly persnickety and I show that especially when the "Advance Critique Encouraged" is above. I personally wasn't too thrilled about the Doublebladed Lightsaber name, but I conceded since it sounds better than Doublebladed lightsword and it really was just a fused saber to the bottom for all intensive purposes (I am SW nerdy enough to know the details that differ though).
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
ShadowWolfX1 [2008-09-21 05:41:10 +0000 UTC]
Sketchy, but I think it adds to the charm. On a whole I like the red and black. As a Jedi fan the hand LS blade things throws me off as well as describing a Dark Jedi as a "padawan". They're initiates, acolytes, and then Dark Jedi Knights, then other titles and hence forth. On the whole it has a nice gritty element to it and the pictures flows well with all the darker colors.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0