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Lostindamnation β€” His Will Be Done
Published: 2008-12-03 03:57:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 548; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description She laughs as she pulls,
The sweat-soaked leather sliding through the buckle.
Lifting the dented metal free,
She places it on the coarse table with a fond delicacy.
She laughs for a battle won
And a good deed done.

She pulls the mesh over her head
And it claws at her hair.
She winces, and pulls harder.
Sacrifice in the name of God,
BlessΓ©d be thy name.
Was it gold? Was it ebony?
Is it crimson, fading to rust?

He watches her with unwavering eyes,
So noble, so proud. She’s his angel,
Infallible in her fight,
Invaluable in her might.
A perfect knight, she shines,
Almost divine.
His fingers tug at his collar, idly loosening the noose.

Would He care if we were to dance?
His will be done.
Could you deny His request?
My will be done.
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Comments: 9

Sarcasmkillz [2009-02-14 20:13:38 +0000 UTC]

simply ill

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BrandiDeer [2008-12-16 01:43:46 +0000 UTC]

I love this.
SO much.

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Lostindamnation In reply to BrandiDeer [2008-12-16 01:50:26 +0000 UTC]

I know. You told me.

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BrandiDeer In reply to Lostindamnation [2008-12-16 01:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha

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Basil-to-his-Dorian [2008-12-05 04:32:19 +0000 UTC]

you know i can't critique you. i do like it tho.

it sighs faintly, sexual. but not overt or overdone.

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Lostindamnation In reply to Basil-to-his-Dorian [2008-12-05 20:37:04 +0000 UTC]

Ah, you caught the sexual tone? I applaud you.

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Basil-to-his-Dorian In reply to Lostindamnation [2008-12-07 00:56:35 +0000 UTC]

lol it seemed obvious to me.

you rule.

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whispered-nightmares [2008-12-04 10:24:23 +0000 UTC]

i love the lines "Infallible in her fight,
Invaluable in her might.
A perfect knight, she shines,
Almost divine. "

like the rhyme scheme is amazing and its very descriptive and vivid. good job overall

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Lostindamnation In reply to whispered-nightmares [2008-12-04 19:59:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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