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First time I am feeling brave enough to attempt a critique & hope this is helpful;
Babes in the woods meets a vision quest. I really think this makes it more unique because I haven't seen this combination of ideas before and the blue tones are well suited to this expression because it lends to a sense of dreamy exploration. Or that's my understanding of the influences on the imagery, when I look at it. It's definitely of the sort of caliber I'd expect to see in a illustrated hardback.
Minor imperfections I can pick out are that the image is ever so slightly lopsided, shrinking away slightly on the side to my left but it may not have been your wish to draw a symmetrical image, so you will want to disregard this comment if it's designed to be asymmetrical.
The girl on my right is also missing a little bit of her left foot and the left leg might be a tiny bit too slim, compared to the right? I'm not sure as I'm not great at drawing perspective.
Overall, a great piece ^_^
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I'm glad you like the piece and thanks so much for leaving a crit! It's really helpful. 
Thanks!
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Hello, ObsydianDreamer here to give you a critique! Feel free to disregard anything you don't agree with - after all, this is just my opinion.
First of all, this is a really cute piece. The two friends walking produces a lovely tone of togetherness; the enclosing of the trees around them helps to add to that tone and feel. Adding onto that, I like the feeling of togetherness in contrast to the darkness of the forest; they're walking into the unknown, but together.
Now, for the actual critique. This is a lovely piece, so it's hard to pick out things to improve, i'd say it's the girl on the lefts skirt. The whole image in in monochrome blue, except for her skirt, which seems to be a warmer purple-y colour (at least to me). If you redo this piece, I would recommend making her skirt a shade of blue, or adding in more colours to tie it together.
This is a really cute piece! Keep creating!
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Thank you so much! You're right about the skirt standing out. It bugged me too, but because the characters have designated clothings/colours, I wanted to keep true to that. Like you said, I should have made it more of a blue shade!
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Still a lovely image though!
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So beautiful, it's reminiscent of a scrapbook. I love it!
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looks magical & adventerous 
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Wow! For a second there I thought that it was a paper cutting technique!
Nice 3D impression!Β 0u0 b
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