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Published: 2012-09-15 14:51:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 885; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description Name : Asoka Hirochi
Age : 15
Talents: Singing, playing instruments
like: beening around friends
Dislikes : being alone
Bio: a shy girl

how she met ralick :
Asoka hirochi is the daughter of the MatsuziKi Family , rich powerful they were the best, but one evening their eating their dinner at 7pm an assassin poison asoka's food after she ate the she fainted and he ran away requesting 20 million dollars from the father for the poison's cure and he must deliver it to their HQ at the outskirts of town , they took her to the hospital and the doctor said their no other cure , her parents stood outside saying

Dad: that girl well ruin our business

Mom : i think it better for her to the die than for us to go broke

Dad: i agreed ...

As they walk away Asoka was lying on her bed crying in her hosptial room knowing that her parents wanted her dead , shortly after ralick and yakin came to the hospital after fighting Gangs , they were took a room close to asoka, ralick got up from his bed and head to the toilet wanting to pee when he finished heard the doctors talking outside the toilets saying

Doctor 1: that poor girl, if it was my daughter i would give 50 million

Doctor 2: yea but apparently this guy doesnt want to give up his money to save his daughter .. the world is terrible

Doctor 1: u can said that again..i wish there was someone that can help

Ralick came out of the toilet saying

Ralick: ill do it

Doctor 1:but ur injuries...

Ralick: screw that man a young girls live is in danger , her own parents dont even want to save her their even worth being called human being . so tell me where their HQ is?

Doctor 1 and 2:!!!!!

?????: U got guts kid and a good soul

Ralick: ?.. who are u ?

Fazuki : Names Fazuki im asoka's guradian the girl ur trying to save if u wanna help ill show u the way

Ralick : Great lets go get my friend

They both went to Ralick and Yakin's room and there was a note attach to the door for ralick it said
''Ralick this note is for u if u wake me when im sleeping ...ill bite u to death''

Ralick: that guy!! well looks like its just u and me come on lets go

Fazuki: ok! come on i know where their base is

They both when outside got into fazuki's car and drove the enemies HQ , they broke down the gate and the alarm came on , the enemy boss was scared

Boss: enemy are attacking send men to kill them!

Gang Member : boss they already been defeated

Boss:WHAT!??! then block the door dont let then through

Gang member : i cant sir

Boss: why not ??!!

Gang member: because ...their already here

Boss: !!!???

Fazuki: Hi are we thrashing the party?

Ralick : i think we are

Boss: U again!!!

Fazuki: hmm? u know this guy kid?

Ralick : i guess u can say that

Ralick charged at the boss grabbing his neck and said

Ralick : give me the antidote for the poison ur assassin gave to that girl!!

Boss: ok! ok! ok! just take it please dont hurt me!!!

Fazuki: chzz..how pathetic

Ralick : come on we gotta hurry

Fazuki: right!!

they jumped out the window ran to the car and hurry to the hosptial , with a other a few seconds remaining they reach the hospital ran to the room in time..asoka was unconscious on her bed they quickly gave her the medicine

Ralick: come on! come on!

Fazuki: are we too late?!

Ralick : give it time

a few seconds passed by and nothing happened

Ralick: Come On!!

Fazuki: we were too late , we tried kid, u did good come on lets go

Ralick got up and head for the door just as they were about to live Asoka started coughing and fazuki ran to her

Fazuki : ASOKA!! Ur alive !UR ALIVE!!

she started opening her eyes

Asoka : fazuki!!

Fazuki: Ur ok im so happy ill be right back btw this is the kid the saved u,

Fazuki left the room in hurry to tell the good news to her parent and his fellow co-workers, ralick then walked up to her bed and said

Ralick: hi im ralick

Asoka: ur the one who saved me ? ralick right?

Ralick: yea it good to know ur save

Ralick smiled then ,then Asoka started blushing, jumped out of her bed and kissed ralick

Asoka: THANK FOR SAVING ME!!

She then ran outside

Ralick : well that was ..nice

then someone came by the door, it was yakin

Yakin : i told u not to wake me up.. now ill bite u to death

Ralick: WAIT NO YAKIN SSSSSTTTTOOOOPPPPP!!!!!!!

*the end*

And Yea i Agreed this one way to long wanted to upload this yesterday but i decided to take a day off
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Comments: 4

mastersangji [2012-09-15 15:33:09 +0000 UTC]

mm..its Look Strange,but Cool Work Man!

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TKrizer69 [2012-09-15 15:11:25 +0000 UTC]

Hm......The Arms are Kinda weird Other Than That Nice Job and I Like Her Bio you Know the Story Thing

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Spritesliker007 [2012-09-15 15:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Sweet Bro! but i think her face is kinda weird and his arms are a little big, btw nice story XD

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Pizza-Boi [2012-09-15 14:56:49 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm... nice story nice sprite.

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