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Published: 2009-07-31 19:22:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 795; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 9
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Finished coloring it- dunno how I feel about it... could have to do with how my eyes go blurry and get crossed when I work on drawings for too long o__<Anyway, LINEART=[link]
AND- vid reference of one of my fav DBZ scenes [link]
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I just kept stating at this! Amazing, i remember watching this ep when i was a kid- perfect rendition- i feel the anger and indignation! love the hair and eyes! Very Nice!!
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Awhythankyou ;D
I tried my very best to capture the essence of what was the greatest nerdgasm of my middle school career and I think, on some level, I have succeeded ;D
Glad ya like it!
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This only makes me laugh, there are no other words.
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Hawhaw, I didn't intend for it to be funny when I drew it but, considering the subject matter and scenario, one cannot help but lulz a little
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Hawsome. I like the sky, and the eyes, and the veins still make me lolz. However, I kinda think the shirt should be darker (otherwise the scene may be a little too lighthearted and happy, you know how it is). Also, the hair bothers me (sorry, I keep focusing on the hair). It seems too green, although who knows why black and yellow equal green. I feel it should be black with more of a yellow glow to it to avoid that green color, but it's your art so your choice. It's just, I think it tends to blend in with the background. Just a thought.
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It's GOOD that you keep focusing on the hair- that's what I want people to do. face/hair/face/fair.
You may be right about its hue, but I only wanted to HINT at yellow, not make it so much obvious. There might be a better way around it... I wanted the hair to have a yellowish tint throughout.. I DID try leaving it all black with a yellow rim lighting, but it looked really odd..
But you do have a point- the hair is greenish... which I've just now decided is what I want cause the sea and sky are green so it SHOULD have a greenish tint?...>.> kinda like how his skin doesn't.
Thanks for the crituque, though! Critiques are important
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I just note things as I note 'em. And it is your choice, I was just mentioning what I would work with... if I could do stuff this awesome, as it were.
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Indeed- they're all good suggestions and they're good to remember for future pieces- you must remember that you are contending with my lazy art work ethic and "path of least resistance" mentality
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And my advice will continue as long as you are too lazy to fight it.
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Also, his hair is WAY green on my work computer but, at home, it has a pleasent yellow hue through it.
NOW I see what you're talkign about. Unfortunately, it cannot be fixed.
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Okay, so it could be the way my laptop is showing it.
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I'm glad we've reached an understanding.
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O_O
Glad I could help >.>
lulz
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ohhhh, I'm REALLY impressed by that lightening. Whatever you did, it makes the clouds look like they have a lot of mass. Thundery, ominous mass. Also, the teeth are fixed x)
And I'd be lying if I said the eyes didn't freak me out a little.
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Awww, thanks Leah
I'm also glad that the eyes disturb you
*also, if you think back on it, the creepiness present in the eyes is almost entirely your fault ;D*
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AHH, you're right. I would say I've created a monster, but then I realized most of the o_o factor comes from him having nearly nonexistent pupils. And I take no responsibility for that.
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I still think it's fair to say you've created a monster
Also, for the record, I was fully prepared to go 100%WHITEEYE on this one, but I don't know what held me back.
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Even though this contributes very little to the conversation, I just wanted to say: lol, it kinda looks like our icons are yelling at each other.
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Also, Leah, I feel really bad that this creeped you out. I redid it to try and make it a little more happy and whimsical.
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I think this is what they in the industry refer to as "backfire".
I tried, Leah, I really did. Candycanes... Cupcakes.. who'd have thought?
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ololContributes very little? Hmm.
I'll allow it.
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Oh, also, for the lightning, I just drew a squiggly line and blurred/erased it in certain places. HYPERADVANCEDARTTECHNIQUE! D:
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