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Questions... always questions... Sunaki knows how to spoil the mood
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Volume 4 : TO FIX WHAT IS BROKEN
Cover : fav.me/d70tx2d
Chap 31 : luciol-sunaki.deviantart.com/a…
Chap 32 : fav.me/d6uc9v0
Chap 33 : fav.me/d75ngdm
Chap 34 : fav.me/d7l5h9z
Chap 35 : Sunaki's story chap35 p1
Chap 36 : Sunaki's story chap36 p1
Chap 37 : Sunaki's story chap37 p1
Chap 38 : ---
Volume 1 : TO MAKE A FRIEND luciol-sunaki.deviantart.com/a…
Volume 2 : TO KNOW WHAT LOVE IS sunaki-san.deviantart.com/art/…
Volume 3 : TO MAKE SACRIFICES fav.me/d53fdkk
Gaara (c) Masashi Kishimoto
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... Oh shit, that's right, she doesn't know about that...
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I would say the following changes to the last two word bubbles:
When I was a child, I remember everyone was scared of you. People used to tell me about the horrible things that you did. They said you killed civilians ...
Innocent people, who weren't a threat to you. There are even people who say you used to kill for pleasure ... because you liked it.
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I can't believe it, thank you so much
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There is one little detail I think could be improved.
"Sadly, it isn't that kind of question. ..." While I don't think there is technically anything wrong with the way you've written it, the usual way this phrase is said, at least in the US, is 'that kind of question'.
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Thank you. I've changed it
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