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Peace-In-Violence [2017-03-22 14:42:43 +0000 UTC]

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Hey there, I thought I might try and rustle up that critique for you. Feel free to ignore me though.
Like you said in the description, the flowers are quite spectacular. Furthermore you have a nice contrast going on between the dark and flower backgrounds. A way you could augment this contrast is too actually flip the shading and have the lighting coming from the top left. If you do this, the mc would be shaded where the background is light and illuminated with the background is dark.
Now, looking at your picture as a whole I can only see one consistent difficulty and that's your reliance on lines to separate parts of the body. This is an extremely two edged sword because sometime it does its job a little too well. Your biggest offender is the line designating the back of the skull. It makes the ear look like it's coming straight out of the back of the head when the ear should be coming out of the side. What I might suggest ( if I were prone to suggesting suggestions) is that you erase as much of that lines as possible, starting at the bottom end where it breaks just before meeting the jawline and continuing on to where the top of the lower ear meets the skull.
Alright so our next area of difficulty is the shoulder blade ( that little hump on the back) it strikes me as a little small and once again the line you've used to separate it from the main body is doing its job a little too well. Consider delving a little deeper into the light and shadows of a form, these are the best way to show when a limb or part of the body changes into another.
Whelp, that's all I got for you. I hope this helps.
Fare thee well.

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Pepi02066 [2017-03-22 01:40:34 +0000 UTC]

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It's good. I don't know who this is, but I think you spent a lot of time on this. It looks well-drawn and you put so much focus into it. Keep up the good work, and I believe that someday you will be able to draw bigger and better pictures. But honestly, the ears look like there is an invisible headband holding them onto the back of the head, same goes with the cheek furs, and I think there is too much detail in the fur. I think you might find that silly, but if I were to just see this, all of my attention would go to the fur, and not the actual picture. I also think that the head is a bit too round, but if that is your style, you go ahead and keep it that way, I'm not judging your art (basically I am but shush). But you keep up the good work!

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FalconScreech [2017-03-21 23:27:34 +0000 UTC]

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Wow, this piece of yours is quite stunning. You can quite vividly see the texture of the fur, as well as the nicely done shading of the red flowers, of many unique varieties and types. it's clear that you've put a lot of effort into the piece, and I commend you for that. OOH! You're a warriors fan too? Woohoo! (Excuse me for my fangirling). Okay, let's get back to business. While you can clearly see that the main character in this piece is cat, I must state a few things. First off, it seems that the ears seem disconnected slightly from the head, and are behind the head. Secondly, I would like to ask if the gray area near the neck off the face is neck fur or cheek fur. Well, that is all I could nitpick on here. My apologies if I seem to be too nitpicky. Overall, this is a very well-done and crafted piece. Kudos to you.

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Tigerisbeastmode [2017-03-21 22:19:11 +0000 UTC]

This is well done!!  Good job

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gumdreary [2017-03-21 21:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Nice work, I like the contrasting colors of the eye and flowers

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ChrysanthemumSnow [2017-03-21 21:21:13 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous work, though the perspective could use more work on it.

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Kaixa524 [2017-03-21 20:41:17 +0000 UTC]

mind if you do my O.C  Jason? (P.S. i'm not forcing you)

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