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Mad-Revolution β Pokemon Ruby Nuzlocke - 42
Published: 2013-07-29 00:36:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 15308; Favourites: 158; Downloads: 65
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Don't say anything about any minor details or grammar errors. I am a very tired and irritated MadBut at least I got this done before 2 months since the last one
I won't happen again
I hope
I'm gonna sleep now
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I love Rick's expression when steve comes
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NOOOOOO I FINISHED IT!! Now I won't be able to stop checking for a new page every five minutes...
I luv this comic so much!!!
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"I won't happen again."
True to your word, you haven't happened for quite a while.
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Soooooo, I just read from page one and I'm hooked. You got yourself a new watch. =3
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Eagerly awaiting more to read; this is one of the best Nuzlocke comics I've ever read.
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*Curls up into a ball* Noooooo I'm already caught up... NOW I HAVE TO WAIT FOR MORE SHIPPINGS.
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Me: -Sees Greyed out 'Next' button.- Reaction: NNNOOOOOOOO!
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oh noo i caught up :I
What an awesome nuzlocke! I'm looking forward to future updates.
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URGH I READ ALL OF IT AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONEEE~!!
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Rick should really invest (( Or make Pele steal )) in a shirt that doesn't cross RIGHT over his heart because I KNOW that's probably a really bad idea. Especially with all of these Team Magma Members making plans and all...
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MAJOR STYLE CHANGE
BOOTYFUL I SAY
BOOTYUFUL
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been a but since i checked on updates. noticed that chracters seem to be in a more constant thin body type rather tyhen looking odly wider or bulky from what has been shown before and beyond that it looks prettymuch anime worthy. still awsome to see this go man and glad your keeping it up
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Rick must wear his scarf no matter how hot the place...His scarf will follow him until the depths of hell!!!
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You mean the distortion world?
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"So you two want to go up into a volcano, that at any moment, could be made to erupt and kill you and your Pokemon."
"..."
"Okay, go ahead."
PLOT OF EVERY POKEMON GAME IN A NUTSHELL RIGHT THERE! Seriously, I loved that sequence. It's so true. I'm at least glad that the League is doing something about the Magma problem, even if it is just to kill off boredom. My second favorite sequence is probably Rick and May's initial interaction when Steven shows up. I just love May/Rick talks. They're both so crabby. C:
Y'know, I wonder if Steven's boredom is what makes him want to provoke Rick. He does seem to be the kind of guy that gets a kick out of pissing people off. And on the note of Steven: I didn't think he could get any hotter. Then you put him in a volcano. /brick'd for terrible pun
You're really improving in art style as well. This page has a much more painted look to it. I think it's the shadows and smaller outlines that give it this look, but at first I thought there was some kind of filter on the page. The characters seemed blurry--and not down in the volcano which was just fantastic. A bit of a thicker line might look better around the outline of the characters. On the other hand, you just nailed the volcanic tunnel. It looks and feels sweltering down there. The movements of the characters, the harsh low-lights, and the blurred cave walls really trap the heat in. It's frickin awesome, Mad.
Looking forward to the rest!
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I'm really noticing improvements in your style Mad; you get better with every single thing you submit 
I can see why drawing that volcano was a pain in the ass v__v it sure looks like it was, but it also looks really cool so I think it was worth it
The atmosphere inside the volcano is probably my favourite part of this page though! It looks great, it really gives off the feeling of being swelteringly hot with that glowy look (as if there's magma around them *wiggles arms* ) I also really like May's expressions in this page
Also. Damn. I'm sorry Rick, but I'm really starting to like Steven/Stephen or however you spell it. He's not only cool and casual, he's also kinda smexy >3> Goddamn, boy, keep unbuttoning that shirt~ ehehe!
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Steven sure knows which buttons to push ... I also like how mature May came out in this page
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...F-Yeah! Let's kick some Magma's asses and get out of Chimney! It's too hot in there! ^_^'
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PS: Continue with a good job, my friend!
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Your version of Steven is by far the hottest.
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Your art skills are improving greatly! ^^
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O.o| Holy crap...your new style has improved leaps and bounds man, no errors as far as I can see all in all a really good page!
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I imagine Steven with J. Michael Tatum's voice.
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Steven is quite arrogant. Cant wait for Rick to go mad and smash that attitude of his... and his skull
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...To help with feeling angry
Looks AWESOME! I always saw Phoebe as like a cute/shy girl, so its cool to see something different XD
Go enjoy sleep :U
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I'm liking the art changes here! As Wass said, it looks more....realistic.
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Cool new art style * fan-flag wave*
But , could it be that there are some storm clouds approaching the Rickx May relationship ?
Or is Rick about to get "serious "
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Long haired Steven......
I love him even more now....
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Compared to the last few comics, this actually looks really amazing, totally work the 2 months (which I think is pretty fair for a comic this big). I love the new shading.
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Who~
We're going into a volcano, and Steven's there to⦠help? Probably⦠right? :s
This won't end well. A raging lunatic, a weirdo and a girl in a criminal's hideout that also happens to be a vulcano. What could /possibly/ go wrong�
Just a comment on the art though β The colouring looks a lot different this page :0 Actually looks moreβ¦ dim than usual, and the outlines look less clear (almost a bit blurry) too. I think you changed the thickness of the outlines, which isn't a bad thing really, but you're somewhat forgetting to use outlines as a tool to make things pop that are important or in the foreground :s The fact that you lost the crispy clean "shiny" look you had going may also contribute to it looking less clean.
Overall, I think you're moving in the right direction with the changes - you're moving away from the shiny look and it does get a more realistic feel from it but since the shinyness was a lot of your source of threedimensionality, it looks rather flat right now. You'll probably need a couple more tweaks? Don't worry about this too much, I'm honestly nitpicking a bit. I'm not sure how to explain it right now, but if you want, message me on skype and I'll try and do my best at saying what exactly it is that's bothering me :s
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Pfft, who cares about the little grammar errors man? The page looks awesome!
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Lol. I love how Steven acts like a dick without him appearantly knowing about it.
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My GOD the improvement! WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN?!Β
Seriously though I adore your new art style- it looks similar to that of anime with your consistency and the lighting, color, etc... I don't know if I'm explaining it right, but to the point IT'S AMAZING and you have improved so much through this Nuzlocke, I can't wait to see where you take this in the future!
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hmmm, i'm liking the blurred atmosphere of this page.
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DANG.
I am suddenly attracted to Steven in your run.
I especially like the shading and expressions in this update!
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My god the improvement amazes me ouo
love it <3
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Thank goodness, the League is actually doing something about this mess. Guess they got the good sense not to save all of the world-saving for the 10 year olds this time.
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It definitely makes sense that Champions would be bored most of the time. I don't think I could stand just standing around waiting for challengers 24/7; no wonder they sneak off and have little "adventures" like this...
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