Comments: 57
kirafaclaws22 [2012-02-25 03:00:08 +0000 UTC]
waa....gonna cry...so sad....but amazing at the same time!
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GhostPilgrim [2011-09-23 19:14:49 +0000 UTC]
I just read it and its really wrenching
Itachi is awesome and i love this story
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143Gaara-kun [2009-06-22 15:01:43 +0000 UTC]
TT___TT bbb-beautiful....ITACHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!noooooooooooo..
im an idiot...i dun know what is to be figured out..
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Daddymon07 [2009-04-30 21:30:20 +0000 UTC]
HEY NICE ONE
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BrokenRoses92 [2008-12-07 16:15:45 +0000 UTC]
o.O nice. I think I'm going to cry
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TheChaoticHydra [2008-06-23 18:56:08 +0000 UTC]
oh yeah a read this .. i'm blue ...-_- ...poor itachi...i love him....
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deidararules [2008-05-11 04:42:37 +0000 UTC]
ohhhhhh!!!!!! this fanfic its awesome!
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XII-Itachi [2008-02-06 01:08:03 +0000 UTC]
OMG
This is an EXCELLENT fanfic~~!!!!!! :iconmegaheartplz:
Even Itachi would be pleased:
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MalunaDragon In reply to Cee--Dee [2008-01-03 21:37:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Konan-chan!!! I could try to continue it but I need ideas!!
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MalunaDragon In reply to Washi-of-the-sky [2007-11-06 20:36:22 +0000 UTC]
Well to me it is sort of a one-shot so I am not really sure if I could continue it. I could try but I would need ideas. Right now I am working on other stories (some of which will be chapter stories) but, I will take your suggestion into account!^_^
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urchigan-sora [2007-09-23 03:22:46 +0000 UTC]
its great! 8)
itachi acually has emotions in this story!
tre cool!
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Sheelos-lover [2007-09-09 16:38:32 +0000 UTC]
I cried at the end of this. Without a doubt, anyone who writes a good Itachi leaving fanfic has to have some sort of love from Itachi to Sasuke, but you handled it very well. You need to work on your verb conjugations, but the story read relatively well for fanfiction.
This is amazing. You have real skill as an author.
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MalunaDragon In reply to Sheelos-lover [2007-09-09 17:34:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!^_^ And I will try to work on those verb conjugations. BUt thank you for liking it!^_^
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Manixa-chan [2007-09-03 20:19:59 +0000 UTC]
I love it! :3 Itachi is one of my favorite characters. [I don't know if I like him or Sasori more] Unfortunately, I'm positive Kishimoto is going to have Sasuke go Mary-Sue on Itachi and stuff...Itachi better give his 'real' reasons for killing his clan. I know there has to me more than 'testing his abilities' or whatever he said. D:
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MalunaDragon In reply to Manixa-chan [2007-09-03 20:30:37 +0000 UTC]
Of course Itachi had other reasons for killing the clan and leaving Sasuke alive. I just hope my theory will actually be true! I guess we will find that out hopefully soon. Oh....you like Itachi too...yahoo another fan!
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Manixa-chan In reply to MalunaDragon [2007-09-03 20:39:51 +0000 UTC]
:3 Haha, of course! :3 He's beautiful and sexy and stuff. Not evil, though. I don't believe Akatsuki is 'evil'. Nothing is bad if you think what you are doing is right. >.< I used to like Sasuke too, but after he killed Deidara, I got tired of his Mary-Sue-ness.
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MalunaDragon In reply to Manixa-chan [2007-09-03 20:49:17 +0000 UTC]
How very true! It was the same with me. I really started to hate Sasuke after he killed Deidara too, (sorry Sasuke fan-girls, but it is true) that and also i started to not like Sakura very much after Sasori was killed. (sigh..I miss Deidara and Sasori). Sasuke better not kill or hurt Itachi or i will be never mad.
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MalunaDragon In reply to MalunaDragon [2007-09-03 21:15:01 +0000 UTC]
I very much agree with you! By the way, what is this club that spoke of about and how do i join?
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Manixa-chan In reply to MalunaDragon [2007-09-03 21:06:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm afraid Itachi will die by blink. Literally a blink. T_T Yeah, it took me months to get over Sakura killing Sasori, then I saw the Shippuden epis, and I can't believe that I had forgiven her. Never again.
And Chiyo was all 'I made this jutsu to help you...' -puts gun to Chiyo's head- Bitch, if you loved him at all you'd let Sakura die and save Sasori.
xD
You should join this club I totally made the icon for it too. >.<
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meowmeowghs [2007-08-31 01:56:03 +0000 UTC]
OMG!!!! So good! *sniffle* It was sad though. *sniffles again*
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MalunaDragon In reply to meowmeowghs [2007-08-31 02:15:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks alot^_^ I just love Itachi Sasuke moments like that. I enjoyed writing this so i am glad you liked it!
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meowmeowghs In reply to MalunaDragon [2007-08-31 04:37:06 +0000 UTC]
I love moments like this too. It makes me happy! ^_^ I really liked how you did this peice, it is wonderful! I like how you can feel sorry for both of them without feeling like you shouldn't feel sorry for one or the other. I (at least) can't normally find stories like that. Normally it's either Sasuke or Itachi who has been victimized and you can't feel sorry for both it's either one or the other. So this was really great! ^_^
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MalunaDragon In reply to meowmeowghs [2007-08-31 12:48:18 +0000 UTC]
Hehehehheheheheeee I am so happy i could pinch myself....ouch...nevermind i just did lol. But still thank you so much! I am glad my first fanfic was a sucess^_^
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meowmeowghs In reply to MalunaDragon [2007-08-31 19:45:33 +0000 UTC]
That's all we can do is hope that our first stories are a success. No matter what writing is still an art form even if it's not as popular on this site. At least it is in my opinion. My first story was somewhat a failure. Even though I don't think its the story itself. I think that it's just a lack of intrest or something like that. Anyways, don't hurt yourself! The Akatsuki would be sad. lol. Your very welcome!! ^_^
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Kurimishu [2007-08-31 00:45:28 +0000 UTC]
XD-that was enjoyable
wow-this is a one shot right?
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