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MamaBearHuggles — Chikumo Redo
Published: 2018-06-04 00:25:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Taking another shot at another one of my old works on here. This here is Chikumo from 2016 to 2018Related content
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I see SO much improvement between the two. Such as, roundness, structure, body, lighting. Okay, like the whole thing! ^-^ I would like to point out one thing in the lighting on the webs in the background you have some whitened ares. overall, they are a little disorganized, but the light source doesn't give it the possibility to do that kind of color. I would suggest if you wanted to keep it make a very small portion of the light source that kind of white. Also, it would have spread to her as well. Like you have in the 2016 section on the hips, would work well in the 2018 one as well. Not as hard, but indicate that it is there. ^-^ But your improvement is impressive!
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