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MandieLynn — Path of Life

Published: 2004-03-23 03:48:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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Description Zigzagged and unstright,
Twisted and unclear.
Where am I, What am I?
Spinning everywhere,
Out of control.
Why am I changing?
Why can't I stop?

By: MandaLynn
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Alakatarie [2004-03-28 16:20:51 +0000 UTC]

I like this poem, I can connect to this. May I suggest one thing? try making them a little bit longer, it will convery your meaning and portray images stronger.

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