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Mangopoptart — Pokemon comic...maybe
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Published: 2011-04-01 00:04:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 940; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 20
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next: [link]This is something I'm thinking about doing. c': There all my chars except the Pokemon. Its random chars : D So yeah. Tell me if ya like it. Sorry im horrible with comics ;A;
Pokemon: Not mine.
the gijinkas: Mine OuO
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Might I advise you to plot the way you put panals up there more efficiently? It looks a little crowded the way it is right now; it's a wonderful page though. I love the way you ink and your drawings are wonderful as always. I might suggest using a ruler though. Also, if you arrange the way you use the panals differently, you can have a much more dramatic impact. The way all the panals are shaped the same pretty much lacks any impact on the reader.
Umm I edited the comic strip to show how it could be more effective in reaching the audience, please remember these are just my personal feelings! I'm not trying to bash you >.<
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THank yoU! I know im awefulll with panel placement but in truth this was one of my worst page..i have 6 pages right now and there straighter. ANd im still worried about using and aranging my panels so i stuck with squares. I think that im going to slowily try to spread them out and make them bigger.
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I did another page ;u; but my scanners broke again!
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You must fix it fhgffvh!!!
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IM TRYING! I did the third page!!
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COLOR IT *SHOT*
stop being awesome again ;;;u;;;;~ oh i love how you drew everything here
djf you're not horrible with comics you did good <'3
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Really!? ;A; And imma wait till i get new markers ;A; THANK YOU!
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yes yes <'3 everything you do is amazing :CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC
you're welcome
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hmmm...I'm kinda thinking a red ridinghood like theme with the maiden and wolf eloping or something... idk
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Lol well the only main character in this is the boy
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hmmm well maybe then he goes and tries to find his other half and gets into a whole lot of trouble trying?
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Lol i got an idea OuO
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