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mangrowing — Am I a skater or a distraction?
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Published: 2012-12-25 03:49:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 93311; Favourites: 2715; Downloads: 2443
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Well this is not a Xmas pic like mostly of people but I wanted to work on a new version from my first original character´s pic with my current improved skills. Obviously fixing several mistakes that I made on the original version and adding some more context.Of course I also wanted to get a more real situation where Molly must face the world with her figure catching stares from crowd and the possibly most common reactions.
That`s why I specially want you people to give your critiques about this pic not just comparing it with the previous version but the pic itself, you know, composition, technique, anatomy handling, idea impact, expression, etc. Anything you say will be much apreciated!
Thnx in advance!
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First let me start by complimenting you, no artist who improves their skill-set doesn't look back and think THAT image would look great today. I think this holds true with this. Definite upgrade LOL. The first thing I see is the shear depth of it. From the main focus in the center to the characters in the distance and naturally the DOF mobile user in the foreground. But the details pop out to me. The graffiti on the wall for one. Then the texture of everything I like a lot it adds validity and REALITY to the whole scene. I like this a lot.
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This upgrade is awesome, not saying the original wasn't, but I can see the changes made. Starting with the feet, in the original they seemed very narrow and slightly on the long side kinda similar to clown shoes while here they look perfectly proportionate. The chain holding up the one side of the pants was definitely a needed touch. Your originals pants just seemed to be floating with nothing keeping them up, so for the added chain I applaud. Holding the board behind her was definitely the way to go. Having her holding it to her side just seemed to put it out of place. And finally her breasts are much proportionate in comparison to the original. In the original her right breast only pressed out over the top where as here her arm is against her right breast and it is pushing out both the top and bottom of her arm giving it much better feel. I love the texture in the hair as well, and I couldn't help but notice the small set of breasts on the person's phone, get me alil chuckle. With all this said I give you a perfect score on the grounds that I absolutely love this piece as well as all of your pieces. Have a Merry Christmas my friend.
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Thank u very much for your observations and critiques, I really apreciate you take your time to write this!
Merry Christmas too!
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I guess it's up to the guys- if you want to be a skater you gotta be really nice to them- they said the baggy pants gotta go and they wanna soak down that top with water.....
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denada me ecantan tus chicas superdotadas
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Luv her look. Also like that her pants are to baggy
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I really like how her tank top is so detailed that you see the ripples in it. Also I really dig the background. Quick question. What cup size is she.
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Hard to say... I dont know too much about bra sizes.
Anyway cups vary regarding countries, so that makes it even more confusing to me.
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Ahhh is cool. Shes better without a bra anyway. Lol.
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This has got to be my favorite image on all of deviantart! Great job!
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So is this her official size? Or is it what it is in the start of the comic?
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I am not a fan of crazily unrealistic proportions, but the coloring of this image is crazy good. Awesome color work! I would love to see you do a coloring tutorial or a step by step walk through of your coloring process. Really great color work, you did here!
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Thank u very much!
And I´m planning to make a livestream, however I must solve some conection issues first regarding internet speed.
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Cool! I am looking forward to seeing your livestream!
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Moar like this please, maybe a tiny bit less boobage, but very good non the less. So pretty in an unusual way. I want to skate with her and every time I skated in life, it led to disaster on my part. Great job.
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man her crotch is hella low like wow wooww it just extends forever
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She looks to be a skater, too, but she is a definite distraction. The only question is how she manages to stay upright - not that I'm objecting.
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There is quite the improvement, and she looks great
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Great work! The original was one of my favorite big boob pics on this site, partly because I love the idea of a sporty girl with massive tits, but also because it was so well drawn!
Now onto this...you've done even better! Mangrowing, I've been watching your work for a long time, and you've CONTINUALLY improved over the course of your time on dA, and this is the best example I've seen! Keep up the great work, man!
BTW, I love the setting (once my eyes finally were able to look away from the sexy subject)! I'm sure she'd definitely draw quite a crowd when she visited the skate park...I know I'd surely have to go and see her!
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Hahahah, thnx for your support dude!
And of course, a girl like this would get attention a lot on public places.
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She wouldn't even be able to function with a chest like that, much less skate. -.-
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do you ever consider doing osme of your coole rpieces liek this with more realistic body proportions?!?!?!?
this would be cool
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Wow man! Cranked up in every aspect! Love the expressions, how the characters feel dimensional and filled out(gotta appreciate those dimensions! -and how that adds more to the breasts ;D), the use of textures on the steps and her tank top(that looks hard!), the setting - how it's more naughty and revealing 
Mentioning the textures again, I think they're very good here. I suppose it's more of a crossroad between animation and life drawing. I love both, but there's a divide in character detail between them. The excellent shading on her skin brought me to wanting more detail there - I would love to see you use your textures to create that very soft matte look of skin pores because she's so beautiful now 8D That's if you're moving toward the hyper realistic look, which I feel like you are. Again, I love both areas! I mean, aureola.
Love the piece! I miss ya, mangrowing!
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Thnx a lot!
However this is not my hyper-realistic style, this is my full-render style.
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aweosmely done.she's hot and sexy. amazingly good details,colors
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She is much more of a distraction now. The shading you added makes a big difference. I still can't see what's holding up the right breast. Perhaps I can't see because my eyes are very tired right now. This is definitely an improvement on the original.
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This is a really impressive upgrade from the original work. The perspective is much more complex, with a lot of attention paid to focus, both in the technical sense, and in the composition.
Technically, the out-of-focus objects in the foreground and the out-of-focus people in the distance really work very well to situate Molly as a 'real person' in the center of the shot. By being in the center of focus, she's also thematically the center of attention.
In terms of composition, I really like it. While I LOVE all of your over-endowed models, seeing Molly in a relatively realistic setting is much more arousing and interesting than seeing her (or even a bustier character) in a context-free setting. An attractive woman with such immense breasts would garner immediate attention, much more so than the stripper or model with unsightly, implanted breasts.
My ONLY criticism would be the baggy pants held up by a chain connected to her underwear. It's a discordant note in the image for two reasons. First, how are her underwear holding up her pants? Do her butt-cheeks have a death grip on her underwear? Second, and more importantly for the composition, it seems a little 'over the top'. I know that sounds ridiculous, considering how much Molly has 'on top', but while she's obviously going out to show off her figure (no bra, clingy, revealing, low cut top), she's not trying to show off everything. She's not wearing a bikini top. In addition, the way she is clutching her immense chest also suggests perhaps a little bit of modesty or uncertainty about the attention she is garnering. However, going out with a specially designed bikini bottom which snugly holds your pants low enough to show off almost everything seems overly contrived and deliberate. While I love seeing more of Molly's body, I think the picture would work better if her baggy pants were snugged up over her generous hips (perhaps even using the chain between two belt loops to constrict them enough to keep them up).
Baggy pants which reveal a hint of her panties (and the possibility of more) seem more realistic than specially designed baggy-pants retaining underwear, and the more realistic everything else seems, the more plausible Molly's implausibly big (and wonderful) breasts appear.
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