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Manjaro-Wolf — Along came a drider

Published: 2008-05-12 22:54:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 3031; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 30
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Description "I was fishin' for a bitter,
when i saw a drider,
weaving a web from a tree.

I sat down beside her,
and said "want some cider?",
and she turned and stared me.

she said " sorry i stared,
i'm really quit scared,
for no one is here but me."

I chuckled, she laughed,
when I'd point to the path,
along came that drider with me."

another poem i made its pretty good to me i like better than the actual "along came a spider"nursury rhym
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Comments: 10

fugimoto [2016-02-04 23:51:30 +0000 UTC]

pretty cool poem, love that they got along too!

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AwesomeAlex2001 [2015-03-22 23:59:34 +0000 UTC]

What is that thing

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Raiko777 [2011-03-17 11:48:08 +0000 UTC]

Great job on making the hair on her drider half look really good

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Manjaro-Wolf In reply to Raiko777 [2011-03-19 06:03:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Raiko777 [2009-05-17 23:34:06 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, nice poem, I like it better than the original as well. And nice drider of course!

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Manjaro-Wolf In reply to Raiko777 [2009-05-18 22:15:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks glad you enjoyed it and i know she's cute!

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twenschemering [2008-05-15 12:32:08 +0000 UTC]

Cool

Spider-people

I love spiders
(except when they are to near to my bed or on my face)

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Manjaro-Wolf In reply to twenschemering [2008-05-15 22:05:48 +0000 UTC]

thanks and yeah i love'em too but when they surprise me or scare me, well...... they not alive anymore

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twenschemering In reply to Manjaro-Wolf [2008-05-16 09:09:14 +0000 UTC]

Awwww.

I useally catch them and put them outside (or use em to scare the helll out of my brother)
My younger brother always has a slipper handy.
There are a lot of black dots on his wall now

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Manjaro-Wolf In reply to twenschemering [2008-05-23 21:49:28 +0000 UTC]

yeah i catch most of them and keep'em or put them outside but i most times my mom or sister reaches them before me so i can't save'em all

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