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Just another day in this painful land...Related content
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Awww sorry honey *hugs*
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Same here...it comes and goes though :/
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I used to feel like this all the time and still do once in a while but I'm glad that things I guess eventually do/will get better.
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I guess they do...I mean they did for me...but it's a feeling that comes and goes I guess...we can never be truly happy, nor truly sad.
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all those meanings remind me of my life so far
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Don't give up...thing DO get better
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This almost completely describes how I've been feeling recently
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It will get better, I promise
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Well nobody said it was easy...it takes lot of guts and strong will :/
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Don't be like that...better time will come, I' sure of it
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Hi, Sean here from We-Poets , stopping by because you requested a critique for this.Β Sorry I'm so late in responding, just been very busy lately!
Well, this one's interesting.Β It's basically a done piece, artified I guess you could say.Β When someone submits something like this for critique, I hesitate to make any suggestions at all, because the poet isn't going to change it anyway, right?Β
I would, for the record, suggest that you add spaces after commas.Β I think you should also edit the C line so it doesn't go on to two lines.Β None of the others do that, so you should consider fixing it.Β (You could change it to say "Confused in this land, there's no one there".)
BUT either way, I think you did a nice job with this, and it's resonating with people, so in the end, that's more important than my critiques and suggestions.Β 
-Sean
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Thank you for your suggestions! I'll be sure to keep it in mind and try not to make the same mistakes in my next work
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I tried to slice my wrist,but I couldn't do it...I mean I could but it wouldn't work :/
So I just took a razor and I made little cuts on the side of my belly,because I was so sad that the word 'sad' can't even describe how I felt...Personal things made me do it,but now I'm fine,but you can see the scars a little
Super je pesma,tako emocionalna i...pa ne znam,isto sam se osecala,ali sam sada OK
Nadam se da si i ti
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I ja sam sada ok
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Sve se na kraju sredi i bude OK
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Da, samo treba izdrzati ono najgore i ostati optimistican ^^
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We all wait for the day to end, hoping tomorrow would be better...it seems like it never is, it just get's worse and worse the longer you wait.
What are we supposed to do if people just don't seem to care about us anymore? Β It's like everyone is just pushing the idea of shutting yourself up closer and closer to you.
I can deeply relate to all of this, seeing as I am not the only person like this...it just gives me a bit of hope.
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Life is worth living after all...seeing that there are many people in this situation gives me confidence and strength...I think we can all pull through some day
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Hopefully we all will get through this problem :>
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I love this because I can relate, thank you <3
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Glad you like it ^^ And thank YOU
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I feel like this a lot. my parents threatened me with making my life worse than it already is if I cut.
what am I supposed to do now?
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I've been there before and I realized that the only way out is just holding on and hoping that things will get better :/ Instead of cutting try other things that would make you feel better - writing, drawing... Creating stuff, creating art which people liked, that's what helped me get through...keep holding on, you have my support!
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If you ever need some support from a random stranger here on dA, I'm always here ^_^
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