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markmandu — my goddamn resume
Published: 2004-05-12 18:30:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 627; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 78
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any feedback appreciated: spelling, grammar, layout, underwater animal choice.Related content
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i like the design of the piece, makes your eye move fluidly, but i do agree with changing the jellyfish part. definately replace it with one of your illustration pieces, since that's mainly where your experience lies. and i've always been told that when it comes to contact info., have a professional e-mail address. just open another free accounct anywhere and use your name as the address, not only is it more professional, but it's easier for the employers to remember it if they ever misplace your resume.
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Oh, yeah, and do the arrows just mean you go both ways?
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Jason Say: Underwater animals can only live in underwater color-schemes. Unless that's a mechanical jellyfish of some sort.
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i think the consensus is to ditch the jelly fish.
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I'm going to agree with Erin and April, the jellyfish is cool, but really bust out the good stuff for this, but doing go too dramatic of course.
I might split up your background into stuff like..techincal, traditional...etc, and perhaps put bullets on background and work experience, it'll be easier for the eye to focus on right away instead of having to search for it.
Other than that, very nice resume!
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And here I thought you would have picked a manatee.....
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I think it looks really good better than mine cause it's real simple and gets right to the point get some input on the info and letter placement and your a champ.
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I think you should make your name bigger. Can't you put a website with some of your other work? (In case you don't want them looking at Deviant) I agree with Erin...you have a lot of cool stuff and you should maybe put a website on this so they can see it.
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Hehe.. Your layout is much more "cutting edge" than mine.. But I've never been that good at "cutting edge" stuff.. Under Education, I might replace the @ symbol with "at" just to make it a little more professional looking. I'd move your name up to where it's not sitting on the bottom of the box arrow thing, but that's just personal preference. And dude, I like that jellyfish and all, but you have a lot cooler art pieces than that. Like that robot chick..
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