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Published: 2018-05-10 14:24:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Description I will never leave you
And I'll love you forever
I will never leave you
And l'll love you forever

If we have lunch together
It don't mean nuthin'
You don't need to call me
We'll just split the bill

I will never leave you
And I'll love you forever
I will never leave you
And l'll love you forever

Tell me 'bout the books you read
Though I'm not much of a reader
Just want to hear your voice
To imagine the places you go

I will never leave you
And I'll love you forever
I will never leave you
And l'll love you forever

Can I walk you to your car
And tell you how much I like you
If I kiss you on the street
Will you run away

She said, Never say never, 
And forever, Is a long time
She said, Never say never, 
And forever, Is a long time


Yeah, these two pieces have nothing in common.
I've been working on some simple melodies and after a few hours of working them out, they tend to get stuck in your head.
You wake up with it swirling around your brain like little bluebirds. These words came to me while getting ready for work. Had to write them down
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Comments: 11

mecengineer [2018-05-14 18:29:14 +0000 UTC]

impressive

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Markus43 In reply to mecengineer [2018-05-15 13:32:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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CJ-Judd [2018-05-10 18:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Tell me 'bout the books you read
Though I'm not much of a reader

I liked this part

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Markus43 In reply to CJ-Judd [2018-05-11 13:55:53 +0000 UTC]

I find reading more utilitarian than anything else. My wife on the other hand reads like crazy

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RichardLeach [2018-05-10 18:05:07 +0000 UTC]

wonderful color and depth in the photo, I love the clouds both high and low

and that song is great, so natural and well-shaped

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Markus43 In reply to RichardLeach [2018-05-11 14:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Richard.
I ran through some rough renditions last night...and realized the tune was very close to an old Cars song:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=xuZA6q…

I'm never sure if I am being heavily influenced, or if my simplistic approach has a very limited availability to song  structures. So whatever I make is a copy. Probably both

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RichardLeach In reply to Markus43 [2018-05-11 14:28:46 +0000 UTC]

That's a good song.

Ringo Starr often wrote songs that when he showed them to John and Paul they'd say, "You just rewrote such and such!"

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33M [2018-05-10 17:49:06 +0000 UTC]

Always famous last words, this is excellent work for sure

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Markus43 In reply to 33M [2018-05-11 14:01:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you M

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Trippy4U [2018-05-10 15:41:15 +0000 UTC]

I like both...together. If he was rejected the lonely bird in flight would be representative of how he felt as he got the hell outta there as fast as he could

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Markus43 In reply to Trippy4U [2018-05-11 13:54:10 +0000 UTC]

  

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