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Markus43 — Swift Conclusion

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Published: 2017-11-03 15:22:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 211; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Description The wind blew against my face
Dry and cold
Like a blast from a quickly opened refrigerator

Clouds loomed high
Circling the foothill peaks
Teasing foothills' "short" stature

Swift stragglers jumbled together
Flecks of lint in the sky
Blown every which way

They bravely stay
Even after their swallow brothers 
Have escaped to warmer climes
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Comments: 7

RichardLeach [2017-11-04 13:10:44 +0000 UTC]

very nice composition and texture, great words too

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Markus43 In reply to RichardLeach [2017-11-06 15:15:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks much amigo

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Trippy4U [2017-11-03 18:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful work, Mark...both image and words

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Markus43 In reply to Trippy4U [2017-11-06 15:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Richard

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CJ-Judd [2017-11-03 17:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh markus...please give a coldy from that refrigerator matey.

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Markus43 In reply to CJ-Judd [2017-11-06 15:15:21 +0000 UTC]

 cheers! 

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CJ-Judd In reply to Markus43 [2017-11-06 16:50:19 +0000 UTC]

 

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