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Published: 2012-09-17 18:25:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 353; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Description Berly in the sunset, Lake Tahoe, Nevada
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Comments: 8

PhilipWebb [2012-09-17 19:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Good colour and a nice layering to the scenery.
You've captured the reflected light on the water and the sunset almost perfectly.
The model is naturally posed and I prefer her 'in shadow' like this (not that she isn't lovely, but for the composition of the picture) rather than fully lit as in one of the other photo's.
My only niggle (and this is more personal opinion) is I think it would benifit the mood of the piece if there was some subtle film grain effect.
You framed it well and obviously thought about where to put your camera where to have her stand etc, over all this one works really well in my opinion.

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Scooby777 [2012-09-18 02:27:41 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous capture, Marty!

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MartinGollery In reply to Scooby777 [2012-09-18 19:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Scooby!

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Scooby777 In reply to MartinGollery [2012-09-18 19:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!!

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PhilipWebb [2012-09-17 19:56:52 +0000 UTC]

Sent a critique, great piece over all.

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MartinGollery In reply to PhilipWebb [2012-09-17 20:40:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Philip, I appreciate it. I like that you asked for grain- often it does enhance the mood, and very well could do so here. There are some groups on DA that will automatically reject any image with grain, and it drives me nuts. So, I may take that advice and see how it looks when I get a chance!

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PhilipWebb In reply to MartinGollery [2012-09-17 21:05:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I kinda like grain, my 'Rainbow Landscape' was grainy to start with (had to use a high ISO to pick out the rainbow properly) and I added a bit more in the edit to enhance the look.
I think it's a great photo, thanks for making it available as a print, I'll order as soon as I get paid!

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