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Marzipanapple — The Bitter Bunny 3
Published: 2006-08-13 05:02:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1030; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 6
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I'm almost sure that this is too confusing/jumbled/ICKY. :\So my dears, please make sure to pick this comic apart until I cry for mercy.
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lol it is good and not confusing don't worry!!! It reminds me of me at my old job imagining what I am going to say when I quit
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Haha, I've imagined that myself. X3
And thank you!
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Hehe. I like your color choices on this one better for the background, I think it harmonizes more. I love these. And our little collab should be coming along soon, haha sorry, so busy with the move and my love coming home.
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You just made me remember that it was late afternoon. But I...made the sky blue here!!
I'm not very good with making late afternoon/night scene colors (and obviously my continuity skills could use some polishing as well X3).
Haha, maybe it'll just always be daytime in this comic.
And no worries! I can relate to both the problems of moving and the joys of getting your sweetie back from a long journey. I'll be ready when you are.
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I like it...
I can't see anything vastly wrong with it so I dunno whyy you ask!
I don't know if I accidentally cleared or lost bitter bunny 2.. but I've yet to read it. :/ *goes and finds*
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Hahaha, this is so cute and funny! I love the last box!
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Thank you! I'm so glad my punchline was actually amusing.
Usually I am extremely unfunny. X3
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*laughs* I love the mom! I love the mom! This is such an awesome comic XD!!!
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Hehehe, it makes me feel so good to know people enjoy this so far. I hope I can make
the future strips even better!
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It's so awesome! *laughs* I love it.
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what an unnerving cuddly story.... the old one is meeeeeeeeeen !
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Haha, she is indeed! So mean and crotchety.
And thank you! Unnerving+cuddly is very much my goal.
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oh! I didn't get at first that the first three panels were imaginary. 'cause I didn't READ. good for me. >_> I'm not sure what I'd suggest to make the bubble look around the panels more apparent. :F not without having to do without the panel system or at least altering it a bit. otherwise as always I ADORE your adorable little style and how delicate and perfect the lines look. ;3; OH YES. AND THE CUTE CLEAVAGE.
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Thankyouuu! 
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Why, WHY are your comics always so highly adorable?
Also, there is something very amusing at seeing such a cute bunny screaming 'SHUT YOUR FACE'
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You picked out my favorite part. X3
Thank you so much.
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Yeah! Why are they almost always mean? X3
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I dunno, my ex's one hated me i'm sure!!! >.<
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Thanks so much! I'm going to try my best to make it
as cruel as possible. X3
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I understand it, it's not that confusing at all! The only things that bother me are:
1) the lack of frame on the far left, but it could be my computer being retarded :U
2) the line weight craziness..the lines are thick above their necks but below theyre consistently thin so it's a little off-putting. (LOL I MAKE SENSE)
i really like these characters, dude. i want to see more~~~~
also i like ms. bitter bunny's bunny boobz
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1)Ack, I accidentally cut that off. Thanks for pointing that out.
2)Ah-HAH, so somebody noticed! I used a bigger brush for the heads
and a smaller one for the bodies/clothing. It's easier for me to draw the the heads that way, but next time I'll even that out by using a little more lineweight on the bodies.
Thank you poopy mouth. ;3;
AND DRAWING BOOBS IS AWESOMES.
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kekekekk :U
BOOBS ARE AWESOME AUGHHHHHH
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Oh I just can't wait until there's enough for a book! She's adorable!
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So was it a crusty one or gooey?
And where exactly did you stick it afterward?
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lol i like the last one too, made
me crack up 
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to hear things like that.
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awh no problem
hear sweet things as well, so
i like to make people feel good ^_^
take care
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i dont think its cofusing. i think its quite hilarious ^_^ the old bunny in the third panel make me giggle exsedingly.
i
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Thank you! Your feedback is so very muchly
appreciated. <3
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oh goodness, there is nothing like bunnies being angry!
your drawn in by the cute little bunnies then hit in the face by the awesome diaolog!you leave me saying- more please! i love this
(hope that was harsh ennough)
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;3; Why are you so mean? I know I asked
for critiques, but goodness!
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:3 Woo! I made a successful punch-line!
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She's a very adequately crochety old bunny. At first I thought it was a dream or flash-back sequence, but then the wall-o-reality appeared. I don't think it's confusing or jumbled up at all. I'm trying my hardest to think of anything wrong with the strip, but I'm not having any luck.
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Thankyouthankyou. ;3;
I just wanted to make sure everyone knew that the
beginning was just a daydream, and you saying that you thought
it was a dream/flashback in the beginning helps me out. I wasn't
sure if the clouds and the 'glow' effect were really doing their job
well enough, but now I am.
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what a stupid old bitch D:
i like BB's cleavage :3
there's really nothing to pick apart, your comics aren't as confusing as you think they are. they aren't boring and transparent, but they certainly aren't pickapartable.
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:3 Thank you. Haha, I'm glad to know someone
likes her cleavage (cuz I lurves drawin it..as disturbing as that
may sound XD).
And yeah..her mother-in-law is quite the old coot. :\
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