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mayorlight — Desert Flame Ch 1 Pg 19

Published: 2006-03-09 06:55:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 142; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description **From my uncompleted original comic story Desert Flame, Chapter 1 - originally produced in 2001**

What you are looking at is THE FIRST comic I EVER penciled and inked - and I'm always the first to say that it really sucks compared to what I write and draw now.

I originally characterized Amira as being somewhat selfish - patterned after the typical Efreeti "Lawful Evil" alignment. Here Jon solidifies his conviction to stand up for the underdog - especially women. The dialogue could have been better though.

(c) Edgard Angelo Aedo
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