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Description cave speed painting - not sure iff its needs to be refined more
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Comments: 10

AndrejsRusinovskis [2012-12-27 00:56:19 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


It is my first attempt to write a critique, so please, dont throw rocks at me.

I really love dark style of this drawing. It can be used somewhere in animation, or even a game. Because it is so minimalistic, it is hard for me to say anything more that that fact, that perspective looks good and totally right.

Maybe you could use less darkness on the sides of this drawing. I have this strange feeling that its unfinished. And texture of this cave looks so rought, that it feels kind of strange for those stairs to look so polished.

Overall its a fine piece of art.

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mcgregaw In reply to AndrejsRusinovskis [2012-12-27 01:05:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, this is the first time I had a critique well done.

I agree with your points on the stairs looking too good.

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tonyght-lyfe [2012-12-28 02:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Even better- I'm sorry I can't exactly give you critique on this(a little bit out of my zone).
But it's very...alluring?

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Anasfakhari [2012-12-27 21:11:43 +0000 UTC]

Good Joob

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mcgregaw In reply to Anasfakhari [2012-12-27 21:31:05 +0000 UTC]

thx

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Vahlre [2012-12-27 16:05:23 +0000 UTC]

I love the depth and perspective of these. The use of the cool color of the rocks and the warm light coming from the back really pull you in. Good use of color. I would suggest to watch your values though. If you desaturated your picture you can see most of the colors are the same value. If you you put a good mix of light and dark values I'm sure it would pop even more. :3

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mcgregaw In reply to Vahlre [2012-12-27 18:59:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks really useful advice

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Vahlre In reply to mcgregaw [2012-12-27 22:09:56 +0000 UTC]

No problem. :3

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Raggarn12345 [2012-12-27 05:01:46 +0000 UTC]

like it!

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drkevinclov1 [2012-12-27 01:16:20 +0000 UTC]

something you'd find in Edgar Allen Poe's Cask of Amontillado or Disney's Sleeping Beauty
Nice...

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