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MetalAmethyst — Collab: Saki (Draco's OC)

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Published: 2018-02-07 03:35:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 792; Favourites: 60; Downloads: 2
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Description Not much is known about her, other than being an assassin. But dang it! I wanted to draw her!
This was a collaborative piece along with my sis!

Saki belongs to: TheDracoJayProduct

Link to original design: link
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Comments: 8

ProtoTEnterprise [2018-02-10 20:28:06 +0000 UTC]

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Extraordinary design Exploits the capabilities of the imagination  

With an epic appearance, an extraordinary dress, very well chosen colors, contrasts in the colors that make the design more incredible, in addition to how your hair is designed, your eyes, your stomach, your anatomy in itself ...  
It is perfect in all   

The only bad thing is the knife that is there. It is totally dark and does not make much contrast with the layer in the middle, hindering your vision.  

But everything else is incredible OC. Excellent work  

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MetalAmethyst In reply to ProtoTEnterprise [2018-02-10 22:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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adam-ant2 [2018-02-09 18:45:30 +0000 UTC]

The overall pose looks cool but why don't you try twisting her right arm the other way.
That will make it look like she's hiding it, which is what an assassin would normally do.
If not that why not lift the dagger all the way? Then it would look more dramatic.

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Scharle [2018-02-08 23:46:34 +0000 UTC]

Hello,

I'm from  ,
 
You did a very good job on displaying the character correctly. All proportions and every detail compared to the original seem to be correct . If you are trying to figure out how to improve this drawing let me tell you what I noticed and would try to improve:

First of all  I would try to avoid lines from the felt tips (?) you used to draw. That could be hard, depending on what drawing material you have. You already coloured very 'clean' but that would make it better again. Then the face could take some more expression. Make the character could look a bit more angry or determined. The character gazes a bit to much into emptyness, but you actually want a different expression I guess.  

Lastly I would try to put a bit more detail on the hair . Otherwise a susccessfull drawing. One question have you tried digital drawing? Maybe you should give it a try . It's fun 


Hope I could help

Have a nice day 

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WoolyLlama [2018-02-08 03:56:10 +0000 UTC]

cool! only critique is that the eyes are off

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crystalmonsterBATIM [2018-02-08 01:34:36 +0000 UTC]

wow! so cool!

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MetalAmethyst In reply to crystalmonsterBATIM [2018-02-08 01:37:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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crystalmonsterBATIM In reply to MetalAmethyst [2018-02-08 01:49:30 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome! ^^

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