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Mewitti — Alterity Part 43
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Published: 2017-11-21 04:10:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 12131; Favourites: 302; Downloads: 0
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Getting into the red.
Dustox, usually lightweight in the air, utilize Gust and other wind moves by using their psychic abilities to harness and direct ambient air currents around them.
You can also read this comic on on the Alterity Tumblr or the Alterity Nuzlocke Forums thread.
Current team:
Robin the human
Talon the Combusken
Dante the Dustox
Trumpet the Whismur
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The fighting scenes you create in the gyms make me really excited about what is to come but then I kinda think it will take years :/
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OH MY GAWD! D:
Poor little mons.
(Dante is still alive! Yay!)
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Hot damn, the art on that gust. That's gorgeous!
Also, yikes! We're back around to fighting being a little awful. Poor Meditite. That lightning bolt effect there is hecking visceral.
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oh man oh man. i dont think i have ever seen it shown how pokemon can get hurt from things like falls. yikes. that is sick in both ways. the silhouette with the lightning showing pain especially is an amazing aesthetic. the fight scenes you do are always so inspiring. the movement is so crisp and energetic. <3
also yaaaaaaaaa dante!! way to go lil buddy!! my love of bug types meant you were always going to be my favorite, but i feel that it is well earned at this point. just love that moth guy so much
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oooh poor thing! the leader could have terminated it DX
Beautifully drawn!
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...*rubs ankle* nice to see this back and running...but ow...
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I guess you could say that battle was "done in a snap".
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NOOOo I caught up!
Excellent! I love the 'crappy trainer' twist! It differs from all the other HUNDRED Nuzlocks out there! Good show! ^^
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I didn't realize how much I missed your comic until I saw there were 3 pages waiting for me after a couple months away from stalking DeviantArt.
Thank you!
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You are welcome, I'll try to have more pages soon!
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Woot!
But no rush. I understand how long projects like this can take. Besides, the world needs a little more patience sometimes.
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Quite a fantastic read thus far.
I like the little details with regards to how humans are perceived in this comic. I hope to see more as this story progresses.
Keep it up.
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Man the way you illustrate how 'the wind' works is dangum beautiful~!
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I totally ADORE the eay Dante made gust attack.....it's so beautiful...same as the other panels, shots, poses and how you managed to portait things that I know are rather hard to be drawn.
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Ouch. I flinched in real life for that Meditite.
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I really dig the deconstruction within this nuzlock.
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To be honest, I'm with Robin on the fact that if a Pokemon is hurt and is unable to battle, then it shouldn't battle. Oh gosh, I wonder how this nuzlocke will go on. I can't wait until the next update!
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I was never worried for Dante during this battle - you'd have to be a special kind of incompetent to fail at Brawly's gym with a Dustox in-game, and plus, Mewitti is way too good of a writer to set up something so predictable. But seeing her reaction to breaking the Meditite's leg...boy, I'm really not sure how to read that. She definitely looks unhappy, but not horrified like I would have thought. I have a feeling whatever's going on in her head is a lot more complex than we've been giving her credit for.
Major props on the actual fight scene - some of those panels could pass as stop-motion frames. Also, the way you interpret even the most basic moves like Gust is a huge part of why I love this comic so much.
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I think the most depressing thing about the whole page how Dante look as the Medite broke his/her leg. She looks like she doesn't even know how to react to the leg should she scared, worried, disappointed I don't know what she thinking.
Even if this was said before you bring a sense of realism to what we always treat as a game. There will be broken bones, there will be blood and of course there will be death's it's a refreshing thing to see if uncomfortable at times.
Keep up the awesome art and hope you have a nice day.
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"Be gentle with it!!"
Proceeds to throw enemy into the wall.
"Yeah like that"
bless you this was so fun to read.
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Huh. That's a neat way of using Gust. Makes a lot of sense, too.
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Oh god that poor Meditite D= that must really hurt.... I broke a bone once a long time ago and the pain really is intense.
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I love how you make these comics! Aside from the amazing art and style, you also add an interesting perspective on the Poke universe. You show the cruelty that goes into Pokemon and knocking em out time and time again and what it really means to have these animal fights, but you make sure it isn't overwhelmingly dark with the protagonist. Seriously, AMAZING comics!
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Thank you so much! I'm happy you think the comic strikes a good balance with regard to the amount of 'dark' material. Trying to be srs but not overwhelm (yet).
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LOL, seriously though. I feel like I just have read too many Nuzlocke's that have lost all my attention because they just take everything so seriously... I hope you can maintain at least some of the laughs as it progresses
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Yeah, it's important not to get TOO dour. I'll definitely try to keep things amusing even when the going gets rough.
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1. amazing art style
2. sweet jesus his foot... he alright?
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Wow, that pain-shot panel was really effective. Yay Dante for winning!
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Oof, that looks painful. At least it was only a K.O.
Proud of you, Dante!
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That is the coolest way to use gust that I have ever seen.
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Ouch! Those rules almost seem a bit cruel. BUt hey was that a new move there or just your take on the pokedex entry? For a moment I thought Dante was using Foresight or Detect or something
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Not a new move, just my take on how it might be possible for a Dustox to use a move like Gust. I mean, if she just flapped really hard, all it would do is send her flying high in the air... it wouldn't do anything to her opponent!
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Ahhh yeah I noticed once I began reading through the comments - sorry!!
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I've never broken something but even I can feel that, wow great job!
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Ok, there are some awesome draw effects you done there!!
also... that "it's just ended when one is fainted" is a little hard ( may be u want to focus on how serious a battle is), personal i would accept that it end when one can't able to fight anymore
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That's interesting, normally in Nuzlockes, Gym Leaders generally scold the protagonists for doing what Brawley's doing here. It's an interesting switch up that changes the whole dynamic of how this world works compared to others
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Aaah, what an amazing page!<3
It´s suspenseful and visually stunning, for one. You really outdid youself with the angles, expressions and attacks here. This page was an emotional rollercoaster. I was so scared Dante would lose, got nauseous when Meditite broke its ankle and angry when it was forced to continue the fight. Your comic is pretty much the only one that can get such responses out of me, I feel for every single character you introduce. Even Meditite, which is a Pokémon that I really don´t like design-wise. But you managed to make it likeable for me, great job!
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