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Published: 2009-08-02 14:01:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 946; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 14
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READ FROM LEFT TO RIGHT. FULL VIEW plsThis is a 6 page manga for BKKM so I' m sorry if its short or ununderstandable (=_
'Not the best manga out there, and I'm lousy lousy lousy at screentoning and adding sound effects + dialogue, but I hpe you enjoy it nonetheless.
Tons of anatomy mistakes and others, but I'm still happy I finished it!
pg1> [link]
pg2> [link]
pg3> [link]
pg4> [link]
pg5> [link]
pg6> [link]
sorry for the anatomy mistakes on the girl, and the bad inking!
Thanks God, Thanks hunny and Thanks sis, !
Ohh, credits for screentones>
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Comments: 20
Gahhh Mei-chan! You're still the awesome wonderful nicest girl I ever known! You shine too brightly even in da! Thank you for making me happy!
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Awww how nice of you to say that~
Hee, you and pa-no are also the nicest people me and my sister have ever known ~!!!
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Gah, no! I missed the photoshoot cos my parents actually foudn out about it... so they didn't let me go. Its my bad..... really sorry my dear lenalee, are you still going as lenalee tho? I heard you're planning to go as haruhi?
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Aww that was sooooo long time ago
Hm.. I'm not so sure yet... What do you think? And who are you going as?
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-and i like the composition of the third panel,it's just the perspective not bold enough
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Thank you
I really dislike that panel cos the anatomy mistake is so so apparent here.I just didn't know how to fix it even though I knew it was wrong. Plus, i think everyone keeps telling me about my anatomy flaws due to that panel. Haha.
Gahhh, I have to practice more. Gah, on my lines, Perspective, Vanishing point, Background, technique and anatomy! This is gonna take a while!
But thanks again! And btw, randomly, I love your avatar! That rabbit is super distracting!
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-you'll accumulate your skill and experience,and will get more better and better,no worries ^^
-thanks for the compliment of the avatar > [link] < it's from this video ^^
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-in this page,still,the vanish point,especially in the third panel,if you want the attack looks more intense,better set a vanish point b4 you draw the radial lines.
-and i can see you're weak in drawing curve line too(in firstand second panels)you need a curve tool to do it
-and the last panel,it supposed to be on the roof top,right?coz it doesn't clear in this panel.
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Thanks a lot! I thought radial lines would be based on the target, so I drew it like that. Cos I wasn't too sure on drawing vanishing point where someone is in the air.
And the curve tool, is it a flexible ruler? I was referencing KHR and Akira Amano seems to use free hand, but I wasn't sure. Or do you use something else? I thought it was my inking pen's fault that the lines weren't as neat as theirs.
Haha, yes its on the rooftop. And you're right, I should have added more details of tiles etc.
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-you should go get one of this > [link] < to draw curve line ^_^
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I saw one in popular! XD haha. But its so rare to find one now! Thanks btw
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i like the hair--when she's landing andd u added a boom! nice effect
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you tried some action scenes~ I'm impressed ^^ I can you put a lot effort in here. Good job but also, careful of the anatomy~
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Gah! I know! Was never my strong point but I really wanted to try this time!
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but I can see that this is pretty good! Good job on the effect^^
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eden chan! *cries* you're awesome!
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