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script for these three pages:
PAGE 1
INT. A.I. RESEARCH LAB. A MALE AND FEMALE SCIENTIST TALK TO ONE ANOTHER.
PANEL 1
FEMALE COMPUTER SCIENTIST I (POPUGHES)
The computer started talking about it’s consciousness today,
MALE COMPUTER SCIENTIST I (BLOGSP)
it looks like the church’s grant is beginning to pay off.

PANEL 2
BLOGSP
What the hell is the church interested in developing A.I. for anyway?

ENTER FEMALE LAB ASSISTANT (A DOOR OPENS AND A SCIENTIST Runs in out of breath
FEMALE COMPUTER SCIENTIST II
The bishop and president just arrived unannounced
SECOND LAST PANEL
BLOGSP
They are here to take the project!!
LAST PANEL
BLOGSP
EMPATHA IS IN THERE NOW

Page 2
INT. A WAREHOUSE FILLED WITH COMPUTERS. THE ROOM IS FILLED WITH PROFESSIONAL COMPUTER ENGINEER/ SCIENTIST TYPES. VERY 1980S. A LARGE COMPUTER IS AT THE CENTRE OF THE ROOM AT WHICH STANDS A FEMALE SCIENTIST NAMED EMPATHA. EMPATHA STANDS HOLDING A CLIPBOARD TAKING NOTES AND CONVERSING WITH THE COMPUTER.

PANEL 1
COMPUTER (THE LARGE HEAD):
Correct Empatha. I am conscious and at all times aware of all information networked to me.
The security computer’s photographic images of you, data on your age, address, height, furthermore information from web pages, all the details of the things you have bought with your chip or online. I know the contents of all your emails, every online form you have ever filled in, every line you have ever used in online chat.
I am aware of all of this at once,
Panel 2
EMPATHA
What is it you want to do with this information

PANEL 3
COMPUTER
Unlike humans, I have not been programmed to reproduce and try to grow in power, I am simply programmed to work.
Panel 4
president
Then work for us.
Panel 5
president
we have invested much into this project, it’s time we started to make our money back.
Cardinal
To think I have been head of the church for all these years, but only now have I found God.

Page 3.
TITLE PAGE

Page 4.
EXT. GONGY ARTHOUSE ENTRANCE.
The art house is a venue for playing music. It is several storeys tall with large windows, winding staircases and the inside and corridors on the outside are covered in graffiti. The façade however is large- resembling the art house tacheles or the ghost busters building.

PANEL 1
UNSEEN PERSON TOWARD THE ENTRANCE (RIGHT)
were here to see Atsushi Crowley
PANEL 2
BOUNCER
so is everyone else
PANEL 3
Yes, but they’re not here to arrest him.
PANEL 4
OH...

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I know... this is only the lineart and there is much more to do... BUT one of the reasons that I have put this up here like this - raw and bloody, is that I would like to offer someone the opportunity to tone and colour it... I have 60 pages of script written and a whole lot to get through, I cant do everything. I hope to self publish and sell copies to friends and perhaps any local stores interested- fancy working on a collab project, and fancy yourself able to tone and shade this comic- let me know. (you do not need to commit to working on the whole project- what ever you want to do would be great).

this piece is a little up in the air right now though- I will most likely be redrawing the 4th panel on the first page if nothing else- the mug will be just on the point where it is going to slip from Blogsp's grip.

IN THE NEXT SCENE atsushi crowley and Jill kinoko enter- I have entirely new character designs for them. ill be posting posters of em soon.
I'm tired.
originally done a3 in ink- I would like to buy a fancy graphics tablet and just start drawing from scratch on my pc- I find the current process of getting it onto my laptop drawn out and too inefficient.

Description
script for these three pages:
PAGE 1
INT. A.I. RESEARCH LAB. A MALE AND FEMALE SCIENTIST TALK TO ONE ANOTHER.
PANEL 1
FEMALE COMPUTER SCIENTIST I (POPUGHES)
The computer started talking about it’s consciousness today,
MALE COMPUTER SCIENTIST I (BLOGSP)
it looks like the church’s grant is beginning to pay off.

PANEL 2
BLOGSP
What the hell is the church interested in developing A.I. for anyway?

ENTER FEMALE LAB ASSISTANT (A DOOR OPENS AND A SCIENTIST Runs in out of breath
FEMALE COMPUTER SCIENTIST II
The bishop and president just arrived unannounced
SECOND LAST PANEL
BLOGSP
They are here to take the project!!
LAST PANEL
BLOGSP
EMPATHA IS IN THERE NOW

Page 2
INT. A WAREHOUSE FILLED WITH COMPUTERS. THE ROOM IS FILLED WITH PROFESSIONAL COMPUTER ENGINEER/ SCIENTIST TYPES. VERY 1980S. A LARGE COMPUTER IS AT THE CENTRE OF THE ROOM AT WHICH STANDS A FEMALE SCIENTIST NAMED EMPATHA. EMPATHA STANDS HOLDING A CLIPBOARD TAKING NOTES AND CONVERSING WITH THE COMPUTER.

PANEL 1
COMPUTER (THE LARGE HEAD):
Correct Empatha. I am conscious and at all times aware of all information networked to me.
The security computer’s photographic images of you, data on your age, address, height, furthermore information from web pages, all the details of the things you have bought with your chip or online. I know the contents of all your emails, every online form you have ever filled in, every line you have ever used in online chat.
I am aware of all of this at once,
Panel 2
EMPATHA
What is it you want to do with this information

PANEL 3
COMPUTER
Unlike humans, I have not been programmed to reproduce and try to grow in power, I am simply programmed to work.
Panel 4
president
Then work for us.
Panel 5
president
we have invested much into this project, it’s time we started to make our money back.
Cardinal
To think I have been head of the church for all these years, but only now have I found God.

Page 3.
TITLE PAGE

Page 4.
EXT. GONGY ARTHOUSE ENTRANCE.
The art house is a venue for playing music. It is several storeys tall with large windows, winding staircases and the inside and corridors on the outside are covered in graffiti. The façade however is large- resembling the art house tacheles or the ghost busters building.

PANEL 1
UNSEEN PERSON TOWARD THE ENTRANCE (RIGHT)
were here to see Atsushi Crowley
PANEL 2
BOUNCER
so is everyone else
PANEL 3
Yes, but they’re not here to arrest him.
PANEL 4
OH...

------------------------------------
I know... this is only the lineart and there is much more to do... BUT one of the reasons that I have put this up here like this - raw and bloody, is that I would like to offer someone the opportunity to tone and colour it... I have 60 pages of script written and a whole lot to get through, I cant do everything. I hope to self publish and sell copies to friends and perhaps any local stores interested- fancy working on a collab project, and fancy yourself able to tone and shade this comic- let me know. (you do not need to commit to working on the whole project- what ever you want to do would be great).

this piece is a little up in the air right now though- I will most likely be redrawing the 4th panel on the first page if nothing else- the mug will be just on the point where it is going to slip from Blogsp's grip.

IN THE NEXT SCENE atsushi crowley and Jill kinoko enter- I have entirely new character designs for them. ill be posting posters of em soon.
I'm tired.
originally done a3 in ink- I would like to buy a fancy graphics tablet and just start drawing from scratch on my pc- I find the current process of getting it onto my laptop drawn out and too inefficient.