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Mickiie — Please Forgive Me

Published: 2011-03-02 03:13:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 3648; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 28
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Description It was late at night, the eerie part of the dark, where each pawstep felt like an eternity, and every noise makes your fur raise at the back of your neck, this is the time the tyrant of the Pridelands, Scar, felt most comfortable. But on this night, he had duty on his mind.
Scar had realized something, something that sparked a plug in his brain, and got him thinking. He felt dizzy. Why did he feel so queasy and dizzy? Why did he feel so...sick? Was it because of the shortage of food? Perhaps. Was it the drought of water? Possibly. All these things could be it, but Scar knew this wasn't why. Guilt. It was eating him from the inside out.
Scar looked down at his claws, at the tip of each was a smidge of red...blood red. No one else could see it, but himself. He knew what it was, who's it was. Mufasa. No matter how many times he tried to scrape it off, it would never come off. It might as well been engraved on him. He tried to hold himself up, but he was too weak. He collapsed on the tip of pride rock, letting his paws hang over the side. Tears slipped out his eyes. He threw his head back, and called out to the night sky. "Brother! Brother! Are you there?"
Suddenly, a swarm of clouds circled around, then formed a ghostly figure, which was obviously his brother, Mufasa. The sight of him made his stomach ache. He could barely speak past the lump in his throat. It ached, and brought even more tears to his eyes.
"Brother, please forgive me! I cannot. I lied. I cannot lead a pride like I thought i could." he gestured out towards his kingdom. "Look at the grass! It has wilted, thus no more prey. The shortage of water has lead us to dehydration! Our lionesses shouldn't be able to last another moon! I-I can't go on. I thought I could...but...," He couldn't even hold the weight of his own head, his neck was aching. "I..." He looked up at the ghost of the king. He had not said a word. He just stood there, with a subtle smirk.
"Is that all you can do?! Look down at me, your brother, as I lay practically dead?"
The ghost furrowed his brow, and gave a low bellow, "Is that not what you did, when you threw me off the gorge, Brother?"
That was all. He turned around, and vanished. Scar's head fell into his paws, and he wept that whole night. When he awoke, though his face and eyes ached from crying so hard, but he had an unusual spring in his step, and sudden energy.
Coincidentally, that next night, Simba had came.

Just a concept Think about it, maybe watch the original movie, and then maybe reread this
For the TLKFAA contest My color inspiration is Violet/Purple, the color of forgiveness, and from what i read, also sadness.
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Comments: 23

TheGreatDemonLord [2011-07-23 08:02:15 +0000 UTC]

So does it mean Mufasa will take him away after the fight is over and forgave him?

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Mickiie In reply to TheGreatDemonLord [2011-07-23 20:35:30 +0000 UTC]

My, this picture is old x3 Well, i believe so, but you can believe whatever you want ^^ I think in the end, Mufasa would pity him, and grant his forgiveness.

Thanks for the comment ^_^

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TheGreatDemonLord In reply to Mickiie [2011-07-27 08:25:20 +0000 UTC]

That would be nice. ^^

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Berrybaby27 [2011-07-09 15:22:30 +0000 UTC]

T___T

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Chamachez [2011-07-06 05:10:36 +0000 UTC]

love this!!!!!!

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Mickiie In reply to Chamachez [2011-07-06 05:37:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Brengie!! <33 ^^ I must admit, this is a bit older (well to me XDD) But nonetheless, glad you like it ^^

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Chamachez In reply to Mickiie [2011-07-06 05:38:48 +0000 UTC]

lol it popped up in my inbox and I was like OMFG!!!! EPICNESS!

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Mickiie In reply to Chamachez [2011-07-06 05:45:29 +0000 UTC]

Awww thanks hon XDD <333 I may redraw this, make the background a bit better X3

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Titan-Reus [2011-03-04 22:59:51 +0000 UTC]


wow man, you're an amazing writer!
I love the feel of the pic, the sky and the fog. c:

if i could also give you a bit of advice, the grass or branch you made close to the screen could like have more then one, or maybe a darker color or black.
i hope this helped and not sounded mean XD

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Mickiie In reply to Titan-Reus [2011-03-04 23:45:31 +0000 UTC]

Tankoo Ti <33333 VOTE VOTE VOTE >8D Jkin' ya XDDDD

And thanks for the advice! I know, haha XDD I tried to put more, but it covered up like the whole pic lol XD

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Titan-Reus In reply to Mickiie [2011-03-04 23:51:33 +0000 UTC]


no prob <3 and i'll totally vote!

oh well, there is also a way to make the grass brushes to make less grass if your intersted for another pic (:

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Mickiie In reply to Titan-Reus [2011-03-04 23:57:21 +0000 UTC]

Yayyyyyy <333333

Really? /ish interested 8D

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Titan-Reus In reply to Mickiie [2011-03-05 00:25:59 +0000 UTC]


ok so you go to
windows ---> brushes --> and scattering

there's a ton other features too

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Mickiie In reply to Titan-Reus [2011-03-05 01:57:47 +0000 UTC]

*tests* That is so freakin coooollll <333333 Tankoo dear <3

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Titan-Reus In reply to Mickiie [2011-03-05 03:37:49 +0000 UTC]


no prob. ^^ happy it worked. c:

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Noratcat [2011-03-02 19:36:20 +0000 UTC]

Oh my this is excellent. And you wrote this? Nice!

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Mickiie In reply to Noratcat [2011-03-03 01:26:39 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou! And yes, i wrote this haha XDD Glad you like it! ;D

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Noratcat In reply to Mickiie [2011-03-03 01:27:36 +0000 UTC]

No problem. Sorry I havn't written a new trade for you. Busy and such. Thinking about finding a new job. Being an adult is hard. Embrace childhood while you can.

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Mickiie In reply to Noratcat [2011-03-03 01:40:00 +0000 UTC]

Its fine Once you have the time, you can do so ^^ And i try haha XDD

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Noratcat In reply to Mickiie [2011-03-03 01:42:45 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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DarkInASoul [2011-03-02 04:58:22 +0000 UTC]

*speechless* Its So Awesome! The Story, Pretty much everything!!

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Mickiie In reply to DarkInASoul [2011-03-03 01:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Simba Glad you like eet! Now VOTE VOTE VOTE >8D jk XDD

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DarkInASoul In reply to Mickiie [2011-03-03 04:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Yes I Will!! 8D

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