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Fae-Oaksdaughter [2017-08-22 00:05:28 +0000 UTC]
It's sad
that they don't know they're loved
it's so very painful.
It's pain
that stings and cuts
and bleeds
It's sacrifice
that Love makes
and breaks bones and resets to
Heal
It's salve
that saves
I'm no Saviour,
I am a messenger,
just like you.
I cut myself upon my sword,
so many words
in my head that sliced up the sound
of mama humming
and daddy drumming
and baby staring up at the ceiling fan
the neighbor's cow was giving birth
as the crow-song lulled
cicada leg to spider sleep
and rested the living dead.
Then,
Day Breaks
like a fragile Egg
And hatches my infant chick
who reaches out instead.
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HazySunray [2009-11-28 17:22:54 +0000 UTC]
strange how I actually think this is beautiful
sad how I could swear you're describing my life
now that's sad xD
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star1995star [2009-10-21 18:39:18 +0000 UTC]
that is very good and sad... sounds like me...
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okamiraijin [2008-11-30 05:18:54 +0000 UTC]
i feel like my life is just geting more and more fucked up every time i think im geting better. Why?
Check this, i would cut myself but i cant handle pain, i'd kill myself but im afraid to die, i hate my life in every way but i lie to myself that its all ok.
im invisyble to people and im an outkast among outkasts, thats what my life is like. EVERY GOD DAMN FUNKING DAY. (sorry if i ofended some one)
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slenderpony12345 In reply to okamiraijin [2013-02-07 03:21:41 +0000 UTC]
I feel the exact same way...
Note me if you ever need someone to talk to note me.
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happyandlost [2006-09-10 17:02:30 +0000 UTC]
This is good because it's real, falsness of emotion can only be surrounded by cascades of intricate words, though will always ring false. True emotion needs no splendor.
Well done.
*bow*
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happyandlost In reply to Miseria-Cantare [2006-09-11 23:59:20 +0000 UTC]
Pfft, I do it alot.. I write like half a page of a comment and the artist says something like -
Yea... I was just trying to take a picture of a spoon... in a pot... to make my friends laugh...
*sigh*
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Miseria-Cantare In reply to happyandlost [2006-09-11 23:59:48 +0000 UTC]
hahahahahahaha!
oh goodness
it happens to the best of us
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bluefireangel25 [2004-10-26 18:54:38 +0000 UTC]
i love it. this is my favorite stanza, i can really relate to it...
"It’s sad
That I wake up in the morning
And then get out of bed
When I know there’s no point
I’ve got nothing to do
It’s sad"
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Sorrows-Dreamer [2004-08-05 10:28:50 +0000 UTC]
this piece is fantastic...altho, i see one thing which could possibly make it better...you put its sad at the start and end of each stanza, if it was just at the start they'd kinda flow into wach other if that makes sense its fantastic though
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Miseria-Cantare In reply to superlise88 [2004-06-30 02:27:41 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad I right poems you feel you can relate too. though I'm sorry that you feel you can realte to a poem such as this. I hope things get better for you.
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Miseria-Cantare In reply to YumeNezumi [2004-06-29 01:07:45 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. The last thing I need is advice, but someone listening is always nice.
Thanks again.
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PyroAnarkist [2004-06-21 20:37:27 +0000 UTC]
i'm sad for just reading how sad it is to be sad.... if that made any sense at all
thats a really good poem!!
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Miseria-Cantare In reply to PyroAnarkist [2004-06-29 00:44:06 +0000 UTC]
haha, it did. and thanks.
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SilverFenris [2004-06-21 18:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Damn. Don't you just hate those days? Where you feel all that.
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Miseria-Cantare In reply to SilverFenris [2004-06-28 21:50:37 +0000 UTC]
Like every day? Yes.
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Lamarcus [2004-06-21 15:45:35 +0000 UTC]
Wow...this expresses what I feel a lot. I like it. You're a good poet.
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Miseria-Cantare In reply to DevilsKitty [2004-06-28 21:37:17 +0000 UTC]
cool, ill be sure to check out yur gallery
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pinksuicide [2004-06-20 21:52:55 +0000 UTC]
No doubt about it, the real deal. I read it, I felt it and I understood it to an extent.
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