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MissArisu ā€” Happy Birthdaaaaay! by-nc-nd

Published: 2012-03-16 15:14:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 462; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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Description Happy birthday ate ~shoyo4 !!~
Hahaha, ang tandaaaa mooo naaa~~~~
Yeah. Sorry ang late ng pagkaupload ko.. = =
Pisces ka diba? Ayan oh, goldfish para sa'yo.
Love, Greizle


Well, if you haven't noticed.. this girl looks very haggard.. Yeah, she spent an entire day looking for that fish.
Sa sobrang pagmamadali ko.. hindi ko nalagyan ng lines yung plastic nung isda. Ship.. but I fixed it na sa paper.. pero hindi ko na iniscan.. katamad. >_<
Just ignore the errors. (except if you're gonna write a critique.)


Hello Kitty (c) Sanrio
The Simpsons (c) Matt Groening (ha! I googled thaaat!)
Art (c) =MissArisu



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Comments: 21

atlalove187 [2012-03-24 23:38:32 +0000 UTC]

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I love this! I'm not a manga pro, but it seems you're pretty close!
I really like her outfit, inclding the cute little goldfish!
The coloring overall looks amazing, but it looks just a little smudged in the lower part of her face.
I think the last guy already said this, but you can work on the hair-head porportion. Don't be ashamed, though, i used to draw manga characters with what seemed like a Lady Gaga style afro!
Her expression is pricless, that innocent-embarrased manga girl look.
Once again, I LOVE the goldfish. SO CUTE! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="37" height="25" alt="" title=""/>
I hope you take the time to read this! Thanks!

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MissArisu In reply to atlalove187 [2012-03-25 02:34:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for your critique!
I accidentally smudged the colors with my hands.. OTL (I forgot to use a small sheet of paper to refrain from smudging it.. XD)

Yeah.. I was so used to drawing chibis that I made the proportions for non-chibis chibi-like.. Haha.. Don't worry.. I'll practice the proportions!

Thank you too..

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hikizuu [2012-03-17 11:50:41 +0000 UTC]

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Hey dear. Your artworks sure are always cute! My, you sure are improving!

Ahh.. I love the design of this character. She really looks cute and I love her expression <3

For some reason, I think you need more practice with your anatomy. Her brain kinda looks big for her face especially for her body. Her arms looks a bit awkward (I don't like her right hand). Try to look at your fingers, hands and arms and observe how they will look like to the pose that you want.

The coloring looks simple and cute. But the best way to color is by coloring in circular movements instead of going with zigzag lines.


Sorry for my bad english (again I was terrible at explaining things).

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MissArisu In reply to hikizuu [2012-03-18 02:22:01 +0000 UTC]

LOL. Dapat tinagalog mo na lang.

Thanks.

Yes, I DEFINITELY need to practice on my anatomy.. =.="
This is the first time I drew someone who doesn't LOOK like a child.. Yeah. (I'm terrible at drawing girls the same age as me.. I can only draw 'little' girls) That's probably why her head is kinda big. And her body is not that short.. ^^ Her black blouse continues a little more down (the hello kitty blouse is short, I had a blouse like that before ^^)
I am still practicing with my hands.. I think they look better here than my other drawings (I always tend to hide them BTW)

Yeah I know that.. I color her skin in circular motion.. her hair.. I colored it with random movements. (I kinda followed the direction of her hair.. instead of going in circles.. ) and her clothes.. uhh.. I dunno. )

Dapat talaga nag-Filipino ka na lang.. Haha, thank you for the critique!

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hikizuu In reply to MissArisu [2012-03-18 04:29:54 +0000 UTC]

Ay sorry. Eh kasi, mas gusto ko mag-english pag sa internet ^^"

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MissArisu In reply to hikizuu [2012-03-19 06:40:07 +0000 UTC]

Ohh, it's okay ^^

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ZombieSlayingRabbit [2012-05-15 21:03:13 +0000 UTC]

asdffghjk so cuteee~ I love her Hello Kitty outfit and accesories

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MissArisu In reply to ZombieSlayingRabbit [2012-05-17 09:11:48 +0000 UTC]

KSDHGSJUFCBEDBDB! Thank youuuu!

I love Hello Kitty.. ;w;

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ZombieSlayingRabbit In reply to MissArisu [2012-05-17 19:32:46 +0000 UTC]

^^ Me tooo~

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atlalove187 [2012-03-24 23:26:34 +0000 UTC]

love the color!

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MissArisu In reply to atlalove187 [2012-03-25 02:31:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.. >w<

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shoyo4 [2012-03-18 03:42:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank youuuu! #instantfav

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MissArisu In reply to shoyo4 [2012-03-19 06:10:39 +0000 UTC]

You're welcooooooome! (yan ang advantage kapag may drinawingang kang tao.. may instant fave ka agad! Haha!)

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vidiescal123 [2012-03-18 01:29:28 +0000 UTC]

Happy birthday to her~

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shoyo4 In reply to vidiescal123 [2012-03-18 03:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Lol. At dahil nakita ko rin 'to, thank you.

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vidiescal123 In reply to shoyo4 [2012-03-18 12:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Welcome po!

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MissArisu In reply to vidiescal123 [2012-03-18 02:15:38 +0000 UTC]

Greet mo siya sa page niya.. wag dito.. ^^

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vidiescal123 In reply to MissArisu [2012-03-18 12:52:23 +0000 UTC]

Na greet ko na siya, double times. X)

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MissArisu In reply to vidiescal123 [2012-03-19 06:39:31 +0000 UTC]

Good. Haha

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Arisuu-Chan [2012-03-16 15:58:23 +0000 UTC]

kawaii *u*

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MissArisu In reply to Arisuu-Chan [2012-03-17 11:49:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! (wow, we have the same *almost* username!)

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