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moejo — good luck won't save us...
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Published: 2007-06-14 20:20:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 579; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 7
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at 3:46 am in Kuala lumpurLOVE
is offered in such an astonishing
variety:-
whilst maundering down piss drenched boulevards
the 3:46 am girls (and the 3:46 am boys)
tell me that TONIGHT
i shan't be lonely,
that it will be
warm
and
wondrous,
that they will
fix me
right
up.
that i could:
a) LOVE one of them with cuffs
(or whips)
b) have two LOVE me
(for a slight increase in fee, of course)
at 3:46 am
you can find
LOVE
in every street corner,
and in this town
for approximately
12 bucks
and
56 cents
(give or take on the exchange rate)
heh...
if love was this abundant then
why am i drifting along these
sidewalks rambling to myself
awaiting a miracle
only to end up
on a bed
with a
single
pillow
?
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Comments: 24
i dislike placing KL in such a dim lime light, but it just made me increasing more cynical than previous. glad you enjoyed it tho =]
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Now that's the ~moejo I fell head over heels for.
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Becauuuuse the kind of love that's abundant is the crap stuff, and there's always crap. Sure you can head into any ol' chain music store and find all the top 40's, but there's also those one-of-a-kind music shops with shelves of undiscovered gems 
Anyway, this is highly thumbs-up-able and satisfyingly cynical. I picture some jaded Parisian boy leaning against a brick alley wall with a long, thin cigarette hanging from his fingers while he blunty outlines his romantic exploits...
-Alie
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You never cease to amaze me with your creative genius. I aspire to be you.
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I loved it
Obviously you are still lost because you have yet to find ME!
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so perfect and very specific poem, and of course true, I dont know why, but your views of that kind of situation are very close to me, something is reachable very easily, something is not.
well, I was intrigued by its structure, however, on the other hand It makes me recall of some your previous texts.
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wowza, that's great.
i really like the style you used.
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Piss drenched boulevards gleam gently in the moonlight.
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if that isnt lookign at the glass half full then i dont know what is.
missed you mate, how are you?
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I'm a mess of confusion, new potential lover (as in one to love, not just make love) in the picture, hoards of promotions at work, best weekend in a long time... Things are looking up and I dont get why.
Sometimes it's nice to be alive.
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why? cause you fucking deserve some good times.
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meh, I dont really think so. Seems the tides changed already on the lover thing, just another person that'd rather fuck me than love me.
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maybe it will work itself to love that way, it happens.
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you say 'well?' but then put critique not desired
Personally, I like it
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you say well? but then put critique not desired
personally, I like it.
And I thought you might like to hear you got me to liking The Devil's Workday.
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the ? was more of me hoping someone will find an answer to the question. im glad you like it, and really happy you are digging the Devil's Workday, it's one of my most fav tunes by mm
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