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Published: 2008-09-25 23:01:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 65; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Where did the smiles go?
The sparkling loving shine in your eyes
The sound of priceless laughter
You were the sun that made me shine

Smiles tipped into a long frown
Your eyes darkening into dark empty pools
Pure ugly silence echo in these rooms
A cloud blocked out your beautiful shining Light

What tipped the tides
What darkened your beautiful eyes
And makes you cry all the time
Shattered my shining sun

The robbery was quick and almost painless
We both didn't realize it right away
until i fell to the floor
Now I'm a ghost while you're still alive
Why can't I realize it was me that broke you
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hell-on-a-stick [2008-09-25 23:16:13 +0000 UTC]

i really dig that last stanza...i feel like you could put that nearly in the beginning. a crushing blow right off.

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